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我曾翻译的一首歌。。都是意译。

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IP属地:英国1楼2011-03-01 22:37回复
    The Little Things
    It's the little things that make me happy一些小事总能让我开心
    It's the bigger things that make me sad 究竟怎样我才会难过
    Though I know that I've got riches overflowing即使我深知我拥有的早已足够
    Promise me you'll understand仍旧希望你承诺我 你将永远理解我
    It's the memory of a moment 这只是这一刻的记忆
    That keeps you warm on a cold winters night 让你在寒冷冬夜也能感到温暖
    But if that memory turns bad it starts growing但若是那记忆不再如前美好
    It can cause a fire that burns too bright一束过于明亮的火焰由此燃烧
    And you find yourself being suffocated曾经脸颊前一次简单呼吸的重量
    By the very weight of what was once a simple breath upon your cheek如今却压的你喘不过气,几近窒息
    And you lie awake so mystified 躺着醒着困惑着
    How you ever got so high and fell so low你是否也曾觉得自己到了顶端却重重摔下
    Was it worth it though?这样值得么
    The answer is always known其实你一直是知道答案的,不是么。
    It's the little things that make me happy一些小事总能让我开心
    It's the bigger things that drive me mad究竟怎样我的世界才会崩塌
    Though I know that I've got riches overflowing即使我深知我拥有的早已足够
    Promise me you'll understand仍旧希望你承诺我 你将永远理解我
    Promise me you'll understand 就请告诉我 你将永远理解我
    


    IP属地:英国2楼2011-03-01 22:38
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      不过直接看英文更有感觉 毕竟有那意境
      不是翻译的问题...你翻译得很不错啊


      3楼2011-03-01 22:47
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        回复:3楼
        地包还会夸人啊。。今个月亮打西边出来了吧==


        IP属地:英国4楼2011-03-01 22:54
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          那我不夸了 男女淫


          5楼2011-03-01 22:56
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            果然开始英语好啊……翻译的没意境.不过意思是对了


            6楼2011-03-01 23:00
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              回复:5楼
              小心眼人家每次都毫无保留的夸你的。。


              IP属地:英国7楼2011-03-01 23:00
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                回复:6楼
                我猜你是guilty的小号。。


                IP属地:英国9楼2011-03-01 23:01
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                  比我翻译的好


                  IP属地:美国10楼2012-03-29 16:06
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