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求英语帝帮我检查一下语法~~冰天雪地360°跪谢!!

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只要看一下语法就好~
There's about a mouth.At first , I 'm assigned to a company to do plane design.I need study   some very basic office work.I have got to make some copies to hand out. and   do some easy   typesetting
Because I do that in school   all the day.So I want find a company that test images and graphic design.Solid my foundation.To be a perfect skills.Talking all factors into consideration.So, i have to capitalize on the opportunity.It's very important for me.In my limited time, i must   in order to deeply understand the knowledge what i study in school.To search out my own shortcomings and to correct them.
On the first day.I don't know what can i do in the company.I'm ready to help but not know how to do.So i just go everywhere to watch what are my colleagues doing. Then the boss in company told me .I can start with the basic training to making playbill use photoshop and illustrator.
.In the first week.The groundwork is a sour job.But like study the new knowledge.The fundamentals are very important.So i think life is a sum of all your choices.A fortnight passed in a flash, I'm come into contact with new   working content.It is more fast than I expected.But My workload has been very heavy recently.I need to proficiency in Adobe    software (AI.PS.DW.FL.)I have to conduct engineering design,: package design, poster, pamphlet;biding, various tables and forms and web design.But i'm not good at background program.I finished the work with the help of the coworker.they are good partners.It let me save much time.Some times,my boss just give me a creative center.I must do this task all by myself.How to   design the product.and show it to customer.That is a tremendous challenge to me.All together,i understand,it's also   a real test for me.I must do my best to fulfil the task.
Over the case in this month.It let me know,even i finish my college.There are many things we do not yet understand, and we are inexperienced.Therefore, we should study and work hard.In knowledge, skills, communication and interpersonal and communication,i also gain a lot.Moreover,it let me acknowledge my shortcomings.And i have motivation to correct my shortcomings in work.The   most   important thing is ,What is to be done and what i want.
只要看一下语法就好~


1楼2011-03-18 00:07回复
    自己先顶


    2楼2011-03-18 00:11
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      你不会把句子缩一缩么 一大堆的i让人读着就烦如果正规的文章不连贯意思之间不能加连词如 Because I do that in school all the day.So I want find a company that test images and graphic design。enhance: cauz i do it on daily base,hence meaning to find company testing images and graphic design.


      3楼2011-03-18 00:14
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        语法错误不算太多 但怎么说呢太不地道了一看就是大陆货写的


        5楼2011-03-18 00:17
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          回复:5楼
          。。。。媳妇的老师要英文论文。全篇金山词霸句库一句一句扣出来的...


          6楼2011-03-18 00:18
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            就是为了凑字数丫.....


            7楼2011-03-18 00:19
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              回复:7楼
              老师要是水平一般凑合过去就得了/
              如果老师要求很严,你这篇文章从头到尾都要改。
              btw,我上高中时候论文就2000词了。。。。
              你大可以上google论文库搜一搜。估计老师肯定不会上那上面查去


              8楼2011-03-18 00:29
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