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1楼2011-07-15 17:00回复
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    2楼2011-07-15 17:02
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      2025-05-26 05:26:16
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      Dear Ms Taylor
      Football is my favourite sport when it is comes to football I always have much to saying.Recently I often quarreled with my mother about if i could play football with my classmates at weekends. My mother holds the view strong that I should devote all my spare time to study all the subjects well. In her opinion only when I try my best to study I be able to admitted to an university. But I really can`t accept her view. As far as I amconcerned,playing football not only. build up my strength and makes me full of energy evergy every day. could you give me some advices on how to persuade my mother to allow me play football at weekends?


      3楼2011-07-15 17:13
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        好人帮帮忙啊


        4楼2011-07-15 17:14
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          有木有厉害的啊


          5楼2011-07-15 17:16
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            这篇不难,你再看看吧。码字辛苦的说。


            6楼2011-07-15 17:17
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