My holiday
I took way too many courses during the summer to enjoy my holiday, i took mathematical Olympiad, English, calligraphy and swimming. Although school is not really stressing to me, but i don't feel exactly relaxed either because some of the courses are very difficult for me. The thing that bothers me the most is the composition of sentences, me and my sister tried to translate it with a dictionary and i just beg you to give me a star for my efforts.


My holiday:
My long expected holiday was ruined by the overloading courses i recevied during my vacation.I have to attempt the course as follow:Mathematical Olympiad, English, calligraphy and swimming .Although the time i spending at school is not too much,i didn't have enough spare time to feel the joy of holiday i was supposed to have.because some of them are too difficut for me,who is only a junior school student.Now everything has gone,but leaving me a huge problem ,which is the composition about my holiday .In order to accomplish this article,i have to refer to both the dictionary and the internet.I have totally exhault myself to have this job done.maybe my words are not perfectly clear,and my expression is awful,but i still beg you,my dear teacher,be a charity angel,for god sake ,please show me your mercy,give me a shining star i am dying for .

Nice one, but im just worried about isn't this a bit blatantly obvious that she is incapable of writing either of our articles?