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my english diary

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这是我第一次写日记,写得不好,还请多多指点。谢谢。
September.17.2001 Saturday Rainy
For the first time I be late for the works. But my boss don't get angly and I very like a boss and the group.
This the first time I write the diary. I thinks, I will can look the friends be like English help to me. What this don't fine or bad? But I thank help for you...


IP属地:辽宁1楼2011-09-17 10:33回复
    比我第一次写好多了→_→


    来自掌上百度2楼2011-09-17 10:40
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      2001? 珍藏版?


      3楼2011-09-17 10:42
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        IP属地:陕西4楼2011-09-17 10:43
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          不好意思 打错了 应该是2011年


          IP属地:辽宁5楼2011-09-17 12:51
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            谢谢


            IP属地:辽宁6楼2011-09-17 12:51
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              this don't fine or bad?
              这句好像有问题
              是不是应该改为
              don't know this is fine or bad?
              还有什么有问题的还请各位指点指点。谢谢


              IP属地:辽宁7楼2011-09-17 14:45
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