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再来一段翻译。。。求改错,手动抛媚 - -

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I thought I should be the most lonely people in the world,
but only to find a pair of warm eyes by my side.
no matter how lonely I may feel is ok as long as you accompany with me .
I thought myself might be the most alone peope in the world,
but ignore the beautiful attentive things in heart .
no matter how lonely I may feel is not helpless for your footsteps is around me.
when I am alone I can still hold you in my arms,how much sweet there should be .
when I feel lonely ,I can still thinking about you ,how luckily I may be.
when I am alone, I will just hold you like that never give up for a lifetime .
when I feel lonely ,I will just thinking about you like that treasuring you for a lifetime


1楼2011-11-07 21:18回复
    。。。木有人。。


    2楼2011-11-08 20:13
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      爪机压力很大


      IP属地:贵州来自手机贴吧3楼2011-11-08 20:13
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        能不能给你想写的汉语?


        IP属地:陕西来自掌上百度4楼2011-11-08 20:14
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          纯语感流表示觉得第3和第6行的用法有点奇怪(不知道对不对,但我不这么写...) 其余的没看出什么明显错误(最后一句楼主笔误了吧.will just be thinking?)
          


          IP属地:重庆5楼2011-11-08 20:22
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