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The First Snow of 2011...

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Snow
Its freedom
Falls with a smile
Lonely in its crowd
World becomes a blossoming garden
Hear the voice of their wings
The far-away autumn seeking its former wind
A thing of single beauty is there forever
Finding the way to you like shadow follows light
All of sorrow in my heart goes away
All strings of mine will be tuned
For this I have waited long
Morning smiles through its clouds
Silently flying with silence
Forget all noise
The snow
Melted


1楼2011-11-13 09:37回复
    水如星眸,树着银装,真像是童话里的世界...
    过几天就又可以打雪仗了呢,嘿嘿~~~


    2楼2011-11-13 09:39
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      有种泰戈尔的感觉


      3楼2011-11-13 10:24
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        英语课进入了诗歌单元...我们学了好几种,其中最简单的就是"cinquain",译为“五行诗”,它对韵脚没有要求,只要求字数和词性...第一句是一个名词,第二句是两个形容词,第三句是三个动词ing,第四行是个四字短语,第五行是一个代词或介词或副词...发上来一首我班男生写的,他实在太有才了:
        Girl
        Beautiful dreamful
        Crying shopping laughing
        The friend the wife
        Mine
        昨天我也写了一首这个格式的:
        CloudK
        Physical musical
        Hardworking shining enjoying
        Light days of action
        Yours
        哈哈哈~~~


        4楼2011-11-13 10:39
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          然也...泰戈尔的名句我们都要背吐了...习作时也要写吐了...


          5楼2011-11-13 10:48
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            不错哎...


            IP属地:辽宁6楼2011-11-13 10:54
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              这只是英文诗背多了...原创成词没几个...写古典诗词还行,写英文我还不够资格...


              7楼2011-11-13 10:58
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                那你就多多练习哦~


                8楼2011-11-13 10:59
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