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突发奇想,就写了下来~【就是无聊了而已
( 一 )
一地雪白
苗尚未来得及吐绿
就披上了婚纱
只是有些凄婉
独守空房
只待你成熟的手
揭起我的盖头
我会在黄昏
还你一地的娇羞


1楼2011-12-02 17:48回复
    a)
    A white
    Even before TuLu seedlings
    On the wedding dress is
    Just some sad
    fluffier
    Only with you of the hand of the mature
    Lift up my hejaab
    In the evening I will
    Also you a shy


    2楼2011-12-02 17:49
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      (二)
      风起
      那地雪白
      犹如卧伏将起的白龙
      每个挥舞的劳作
      都似画龙点睛
      你轻梳龙的白发
      你轻解龙的睡衣
      把一腔的相思
      埋于土壤
      希望更新
      我们的故事


      3楼2011-12-02 17:53
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        (b)
        The wind
        The white
        Like WoFu will play of white dragon
        Each wielding's toil
        Are like make the finishing point
        You light comb the hair. Dragon
        You light XieLong pajamas
        Put a space of acacia
        Buried in the soil
        Hope to update
        Our story


        4楼2011-12-02 17:55
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           (c)
            拖拉机的吼叫
            觉醒的中央老树榆树上
            充分TouSheng红色的分支颤抖
            爷爷辈的传说,让他们知道
            有人想砍下了她的
            流动的,带有一条红色的眼泪
            鲜艳的红色,新鲜的点点滴滴泪水
            将演绎成为了吗
            香贡她会
          看看你俯伏在现场
            所以虔诚
            你祈祷时,在什么
            你的心脏病
            我的心
            在红头文件绳子
            秋千一样
            从昨天起关上遥远
          


          5楼2011-12-02 17:58
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            (c)
            The roar of the tractor
            To the awakened the central old tree elm
            Full TouSheng branch of the red in trembling
            Legend is grandfather who walked to let them know
            Somebody wants to cut down her
            Flow with a red of tears
            That little drops fresh fresh red tears
            Will deduce became the now
            Incense tribute she would
            And see you bow down to the scene
            So devout
            You pray in what
            Your heart disease
            My heart
            In the red heads the rope
            Swing like as
            Swing to distant from yesterday


            6楼2011-12-02 17:59
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              d)
              Miao peeled pointed to a drill
              Open two pieces of fresh and tender lips
              The greedy, suck of the world and pure and fresh
              The lack of burnout in the present land
              I am unable to withstand the lure of the lip
              Escape from the
              Don't want to surprise fly
              To come to steal the kiss
              Magpie report good news
              I like some of the crazy


              8楼2011-12-02 18:04
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                (五)
                你是出色的田间化妆师
                把墨绿化装成金黄
                金黄变成银白
                银白染成浓黑
                可是情感的色彩
                你调的浓淡不匀
                看你满心壁涂的大红大绿
                我只得摘去我感情的绿叶——
                你还是一花独放吧
                其实衬你的绿叶还能少吗


                9楼2011-12-02 18:06
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                  (e)
                  You are good field makeup
                  The blackish green up as the golden yellow
                  Golden into a silvery white
                  Silvery white dyed ach
                  But the colour of feelings
                  You transfer the shade not divide evenly
                  See you XinBi full of DaGongDaLu with
                  I had to take my feelings of the green leaf--
                  You still a it
                  Actually you can still leaves lining less


                  10楼2011-12-02 18:07
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                    (六)
                    一场及时雨
                    降服了风
                    潜伏了龙
                    滋润了田野
                    你在雨中
                    更加丰腴 妩媚
                    一片洁白的圣地
                    净化了我的灵魂
                    于地气之中冉冉上升
                    我陶冶于黑白分明的田野
                    沉醉于这和风细雨中了


                    11楼2011-12-02 18:08
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                      (f)
                      A spring rain
                      Subdued the wind
                      Latent the dragon
                      Moist fields
                      You in the rain
                      More well-developed charm
                      A piece of white sanctuary
                      Purify my soul
                      In the two rising up
                      I mold on the field of black and white
                      Lost in the rain and wind
                      


                      12楼2011-12-02 18:08
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                        表示nasa是才女么我有种想要抄袭抱走的念头


                        IP属地:北京13楼2011-12-03 10:16
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                          怎么可能是才女,就是会写诗写文作头像做签名档做ID卡而已


                          14楼2011-12-03 10:45
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                            顶一个


                            IP属地:江苏15楼2012-04-25 12:42
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