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Nobody Wins
[introduce]万真:Gorkella 霖:Captain King 珉紫:Peters 顾:Lam
[Part 1]
Peters(to captain king) :Captain, I am afraid I lost my way.
Captain(open the cupboards and see the shelves):En…Our food isn’t enough. I have to say we’ll running out of food tonight.
【wu~ The speaceship landed on a planet gentiy.】
ALL:Where are we?
【Approaching the door carefully.】
Lam:How big the doors are! Each two storys high!
【Let’s enter it.】
All:Oh! A huge cave!
【We see everywhere and felt very suiprised】
Peters:Let’s get out of here,It’s the home of a monster!
CK(captain king):It’s clearly partly human,so it may be a friendly monster.We’ll wait.
【We begin to shake.珉紫&顾hopping in】
CK:Kangeroos!Giant kangeroos!And a monster with a single huge red eye!
Kangeroos:Good night!Gorkella!
【顾&珉紫hopping away】
Gorkella(roar):Aliens,aliens in my cave!How did you get in here?!



1楼2011-12-06 21:55回复
    先是第一段


    2楼2011-12-06 21:56
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      nice、不过会有点乱、


      来自掌上百度3楼2011-12-06 22:05
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        Part 2
        CK:Good evening,Miss Gorkella.My name is Nobody and these people here are my….
        Gorkella(rudely):I know who you are!You’re aliens and we kill all aliens in this valley. Tomorrow morning,you are going to die!All of you!
        【HAHAHAHA~】
        【1~Gorkella pressed the botton and the cage falling down
        2~Gorkella presssed another botton,the magnet pulled the guns out. 】
        Lam:Well,Captain,you were wrong about the monster being friendly,weren’t you?And why did you say your name was”Nobody”?
        CK:I have a plan and”Nobody”is part of it,You’ll see.
        【Turned to Gorkella】
        CK:Miss Gorkella,it’s ture that we are aliens,but we are very kind.Trust me,we can be friends!We come in peace!
        Gorkella:Heng!You came in prace,but tomorrow you’ll be in pieces.But listen,Nobody.I’ll do you a “favour”.Tommorrow you’ll be the last one to die!Is that nice?HAHAHAHA~
        Peters(voice shake):I hope your plan’s a useful one.I don’t want to die…
        CK:That’s ok,believe me,We are all going to live!
        


        4楼2011-12-06 22:15
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          还有一些这样那样的小问题,明天再商量一下好了。


          5楼2011-12-06 22:15
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            好的,辛苦了。


            来自掌上百度6楼2011-12-06 22:19
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              结局版本一:
              A huge figure is moving silently towards ck’s house.
              P: What’s that?
              L: Maybe is a spaceship.
              CK: what’s happening?
              P: There’s a spaceship.
              CK: Maybe that’s Gorkella.
              The spaceship landed in front of ck’s house. Two kangaroos hopped through the door.
              K: hello, Nobody. We invite you to have dinner with G.
              Surprise
              P: Don’t go with them, captain.
              CK( thinking ): I think it’s time to see G again.
              Go into the spaceship.
              G: Welcome, N. Let’s enjoy the food together.
              P: Don’t touch them, L.
              CK: Don’t afraid, Peters.
              G: I have some questions. How can you get out of the cage and how can you get out of the cave?
              CK: Uhh….
              P&L: Be careful!!
              The steel bars sprang from the table and closed over CK’s hands.
              G: Aliens! I will kill you .You’re done for! N, we have a lot of time.
              P: What should we do?
              Pl into the big cage.
              At night, p take the laser torch out. He melt the bars and go to save CK.
              CK: I have told your crew to fly the spaceship here. Let’s go to the window.
              Then they get out of the cave.
              CK: See you later, G. (SMILE)
              END


              7楼2011-12-07 21:34
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                写的不是很好,大家看看吧


                8楼2011-12-07 21:36
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                  Nobody Wins
                  [introduce]万真:Gorkella 霖:Captain King 珉紫:Peters 顾:Lam
                  [Part 1]
                  Peters(to captain king) :Captain, I am afraid I lost my way.
                  Captain(open the cupboards and see the shelves):En…Our food isn’t enough. I have to say we’ll running out of food tonight.But that’s allright.
                  【wu~ The speaceship landed on a planet gentiy.】
                  ALL:Where are we?
                  【Approaching the door carefully.】
                  Lam:How big the doors are! Each two storys high!
                  【Let’s enter it.】
                  All:Oh! A huge cave!
                  【We see everywhere and felt very suiprised】
                  Peters:Let’s go!It’s clear that we are in the home of a monster!
                  CK(captain king):He uses the same things as us.Maybe he can help us dealling with trouble.
                  【We begin to shake.珉紫&顾hopping in】
                  CK:Kangeroos!Giant kangeroos!And a monster with a single huge red eye!
                  Kangeroos:Good night!Gorkella!
                  【顾&珉紫hopping away】
                  Gorkella(roar):Strange Aliens in my cave!How did you get in here?!
                  Part 2
                  CK:Good evening,Miss Gorkella.My name is Nobody and these people here are my….
                  Gorkella(rudely):I know who you are!You’re aliens and I hate aliens! Tomorrow morning,you are going to die!All of you!
                  【HAHAHAHA~】
                  【1~Gorkella pressed the botton and the cage falling down
                  2~Gorkella presssed another botton,the magnet pulled the guns out. 】
                  Lam:Well,Captain,I think she won’t help us any more.You have made a wrong dicision. And why did you say your name was”Nobody”?
                  CK: You’ll see.
                  【Turned to Gorkella】
                  CK:Miss Gorkella,it’s ture that we are aliens,but we are very kind.Trust me,we can be friends!We come in peace. Can you give us some help?
                  Gorkella:Heng!You came in prace,but tomorrow you’ll be in pieces.Yeah,I will ‘help’you.Tommorrow you’ll be the last one to die!Is that nice? HAHAHAHA~
                  Peters(voice shake):I hope your plan’s a useful one.I don’t want to die…
                  CK:That’s ok,believe me,We are all going to live!
                  Part 3
                  Gorkella:Nice supper,It’s said that human beings are as delicious as chickens.Is that ture?We’ll know it tomorrow.
                  【begin to snore】
                  CK:Come here everyone,look at this---my laser torch.We’re so lucky
                  Now,follow me and we can escape.
                  All:The bars are melting!
                  Peters:Can we kill Gorkella now?
                  CK:Use your brain,If we kill her,how can we open the door?
                  Peters:Okay~
                  Lam:Captain is standing beside Gorkella’s head.
                  CK(loudly):Wake up!Girl! This is Nobody!
                  Gorkella:What??
                  【Press the botton】
                  Gorkella:AH~MY EYE!What are you doing!
                  Kangeroos:What’s wrong?Gorkella?
                  Gorkella:Nobody attacked me.Nobody damaged my eye!Help me!
                  Kangeroos:That’s allright.Gorkella is having a bad dream.She needs a good rest.Let’s go back.Have a nice dream~
                  Gorkella:Wait~
                  【kangeraoos hopping away】
                  改良版——至part3


                  9楼2011-12-07 21:53
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                    Captain closed his computer and finished their talking.
                    He was ready to sleep
                    Suddenly, the figure was coming and angry
                    Captain was surprised and Gorkella caught him into her spaceship(C:opened his mouth big)
                    C:‘No .How did you my address?’
                    G:hahahah. My kangaroos helped me catch a lot of people on the Earth to my spaceship and lots of them didn’t know where you are. How unknow you are! Hahahah Finally, I found a person, called Peters and ..
                    C: what? How did you deal with Perters? How did you deal with the people on the Earth
                    G :hahahah. I killed them and treat Peters bad. You will see him die opposite you. The kangaroos guarded him now. ha you will die after Peter’s. how kind I am!
                    C:no
                    When he woke up. He was in a cage and many kangaroos stood around him. Peters was dying beside him
                    P: I was wrong. Sorry, captain. But I saw so many people die and Gorkella will kill all human. You are clever. Save us …………
                    Then peters die
                    C: no no no ……
                    尽力写的啦~~


                    10楼2011-12-07 22:00
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                      Part 4
                      CK:Let’s hiding among the kangeroos.That’s the only way.
                      Gorkella:I know you are there.Stop hiding!I will get you.Maybe not rightnow,but I will get you!
                      Gorkella:Go out one by one,my kangeroos.
                      【hopping~】
                      G:I will get you.You can’t get out on the kangeroos if I feel their backs.HAHAHA~
                      Peters:What do we do now?It’s certain that Gorkella has known our plan.We are done for.
                      CK:Don’t panic,Let me see~Aha,we can get out in them!
                      All:Yes!Good idea!
                      CK:That’s how we all got free.It’s amazing,right?
                      Someone:What about Gorkella?
                      CK:She?I don’t know.Maybe still looking for her’Nobody’.
                      


                      11楼2011-12-07 22:04
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                        顾,你写的可以了。还有,真心喜欢万真那个版本,


                        来自掌上百度12楼2011-12-07 22:10
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                          FINALLY-
                          Lam:What …what’s that?
                          All:Let’s hide ourselves
                          Gork:I know you are here!Nobody!I am the brother of Gorkella –Gork.Get out!
                          Peters:He is the brother of that rude monster.How dangerous he is!
                          Captain, let’s move out silently…
                          Lam:I hope he will leave soon….
                          CK:I think I have to go out.that’s the most useful way
                          P&L:Be careful!We will help you if ou need.
                          【take guns out】
                          CK:Hello,Mr Gork.I am Nobody
                          Gork:You?A little human being?
                          CK:Yes.That’s me.
                          Gork:You have made my sister blind?
                          CK:I’m so sorry about that but she caught us first.I had to attack her to escape.
                          Gork:En~Well…that sounds terrible but usual.I forgave what you have done.
                          CK:Thanks.You are very kind.
                          Gork:But that doesn’t I like you.I hate human beings.BYE!
                          All:That is our happying ending!Bye!


                          13楼2011-12-07 22:21
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                            那个版本很期待看到你的临终遗言……


                            14楼2011-12-07 22:22
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                              剧本的前面部分都在这里了,大家看看,提提意见。


                              15楼2011-12-07 22:23
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