我们英语老师要我们去演讲，我喜爱那个讲讲奥地利，文我已经写了，但不知好不好，有没有什么错误 ，请英语好的亲帮帮忙，看一看，修改修改，谢谢
Now I’d like to take you to a beautiful city – Vienna, the capital of Austria. It’s a city with a population of over 2million on the bank of the Danube River. The environment there is clean and tidy and it’s famous for it’s culture in the world. It’s such a good place that attracts large numbers of travelers here. At the same time it also catches a lot of musician’s eyes. For this, it’s also called the capital music.
If I can get a chance to go, I do take it.
Now I’d like to take you to a beautiful city – Vienna, the capital of Austria. It’s a city with a population of over 2million on the bank of the Danube River. The environment there is clean and tidy and it’s famous for it’s culture in the world. It’s such a good place that attracts large numbers of travelers here. At the same time it also catches a lot of musician’s eyes. For this, it’s also called the capital music.
If I can get a chance to go, I do take it.
