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『求助』求英语大手帮忙翻译几句话。【小薄在此先谢过了。】

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这个故事说的是一对人的三世。第一世,他是将军,她是公主,他战死沙场,她殉情自刎。第二世,他是道士,她是狐妖,他身负重伤,她倾力相救,痊愈后,他奉命除妖,亲手将她斩于剑下。第三世,他和她师出同门,却一正一邪,刀剑相向,相爱相杀。


来自手机贴吧1楼2012-03-06 10:11回复
    The story tells about what a couple underwent in their three transmigrations.
    In their first, he the general battled to death, and she the princess committed suicide for love.
    In their second, he the priest suffered from fatal injury, and she the vulpine spirit came to his rescue. Fully recovered, he received orders to eliminate demons and had her slayed with his own blade.
    In their third, they apprenticed under the same master, but diverged on their paths of good and evil. Eventually, they turned their blades against their beloved other.
    感觉译得不太好,将就一下吧……


    2楼2012-03-06 10:42
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      The story unveils 3 transmigrations of a couple,with their first, general and princess, who committed suicide due to the death of her fiance during the wartime.


      3楼2012-03-06 10:59
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        有语法错误,等等,再改一下:
        The story unveils 3 transmigrations of a couple, with their first, a general and a princess who committed suicide due to the death of her fiance during the wartime.


        4楼2012-03-06 11:06
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          2楼的翻法非常好!


          5楼2012-03-06 11:07
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            2楼,谢咯。


            来自手机贴吧6楼2012-03-06 11:08
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              嗯,等四楼翻完。


              来自手机贴吧7楼2012-03-06 11:09
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                有语法错误,等等,再改一下:
                In their second reincarnation, a severely-injured Taoist priest was completely cured by a whole-hearted vulpine who, however, was later killed by the priest himself.


                8楼2012-03-06 11:20
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                  While in their third, taught by the same master but actually diversed, they lived a life full of confrontations.


                  9楼2012-03-06 11:28
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                    恩,小熊,谢咯。


                    来自手机贴吧10楼2012-03-06 11:55
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                      The narration is concerned with a couple's three transmigrations in which the first ends with a general's sacrifice in his fight and a queen's love suicide,the second stages a taoist versus a humanoid fox,with both of whom personally evening out the mercy and brutality on each other,and the last witnesses an armageddon of a couple in love
                      英语里面好词很多,别背了那么多弃之可惜


                      11楼2012-03-06 12:28
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                        我代替小薄谢谢你们了。 都翻译得不错。我俩正在斟酌中。


                        12楼2012-03-06 12:54
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                          阿暖。


                          来自手机贴吧13楼2012-03-06 15:16
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