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1楼2012-04-28 00:56回复
    本人自己写的烂文,英语十分不好,希望大家多多指出错误
    下面上文!!


    2楼2012-04-28 00:57
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      to hel****ot to help
      people all think helpful is a good personal quailty.we all have been in need, when we are in trouble,we may feel so happy if we can get a hand,.when i was a little child ,i was told to be a person who is willing to help poeple.since that time i know help others is always right.when we see a pregant woman on the bus ,we are preposal to leave her a set when we see a stranger lost their way,it was so kind of you,if you give he or her the rihgt way .help with each other makes the world gose more better.


      3楼2012-04-28 01:04
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        脑袋疼..


        IP属地:吉林4楼2012-04-28 01:08
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          but ,nowadays ,a lot of people use the sympathy of people to make money,what worse was that ,i heard taht one person who helped an old woman who was attacked by traffic azzident to get to the hospital was finally be consider as the attacker by the old woman and lawswit after that.so it become a question to a lot of people that when we see somebody in need to hel****ot to help?


          5楼2012-04-28 01:10
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            as faar as i am considered we should try our best to help others .it is judtice.and judtice always win.only in this way can we live a better life.


            6楼2012-04-28 01:12
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              我知道很难看懂,因为真的很烂


              7楼2012-04-28 01:13
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                木有人么


                8楼2012-04-28 01:16
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                  哪有
                  跟你开玩笑的
                  谁都看的懂 但是小的语法毛病有一些
                  觉得楼主写东西思维很连贯的
                  加油哈-v-


                  IP属地:吉林9楼2012-04-28 01:16
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                    亲,小毛病就是大问题啊!oh no'快帮帮我吧!拜谢了!


                    来自掌上百度10楼2012-04-28 02:10
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                      一 一!


                      来自掌上百度11楼2012-04-28 08:22
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                        居然木有人理我。好伤心啊!


                        来自掌上百度12楼2012-04-28 13:46
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                          呵呵


                          IP属地:上海13楼2012-04-28 14:06
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                            没看明白,第二句有两个主语了,要用连接词,或者其他的。有点像中式英文


                            14楼2012-04-28 15:09
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                              楼主,你的标点符号- -


                              15楼2012-04-28 15:11
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