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我的冬日恋歌

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                        我在这冬日的屋顶晒太阳
                                         窃窃私语将我的美梦打破  
                                         我做梦要谁管
                                         这阳光写上谁的名字
                                         只停留在身上
                                         照不进我心里最暗的地方
                                         永远都看不懂我的阳光
                                         是七色还是无力的苍白 
                                         我打个哈欠
                                         阳光就要被乌云遮断
                                         如果雪天使愿意降临
                                         这污秽的人世
                                         我愿意放弃我的阳光
                                         离开我的屋顶
                                         拥抱你每瞬间的晶莹
                                         奔跑在被你包围的冰冷天堂
                                         我爱这冬日
                                         有爱我的阳光
                                         虽然看不透他微暖的羞涩 
                                         有我爱的雪花只是握不住他瞬间的忧伤     


1楼2005-05-16 21:29回复
    不错哦!


    2楼2005-05-20 22:17
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      • 61.137.169.*
      有点酸酸的.
      有点读不懂啊!
      呵呵


      3楼2005-05-21 10:58
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        • 123.182.102.*
        我老师说挺有意思


        4楼2009-10-28 12:58
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          神id啊


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