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【求助帖,请问吧里有学雅思的吗?英语牛人也行】

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我这周末有雅思的考试,这刚刚写了一篇作文,希望有学雅思的朋友帮忙指点一下,谢谢.


1楼2012-09-12 15:04回复

    What factor lead my country’s football team always fail to take part in World cup? What assist North Korea to gain one score when they face so powerful Brazil’s football team? No doubt about it, as far as I am concerned, it is mental altitude that encourage the North Korea to arouse their potential and gain success.
    There is a vast amount of evidence of success to support why mental altitude is so crucial and indispensable. First and foremost, mental altitude is a spirit which give power to individual. Just as you know, when someone has a persistent spirit, his potential ought to be stimulated then by his hard working, it enables him to have access to gain remarkable success. A good case in point is my basketball team, we adhere to the spirit of never give up and energetic altitudes permanently, as a consequence we won the champion. What’s more, the ambience has a close relationship with altitude. On the one hand, the unity will be affected by it. To be frank, if I were a partner of someone who is idle, my enthusiasm of working will plummet and the efficiency will be gave a discount. This is true. On the other hand, the harmony atmosphere of team is the cornerstone of to be succeed and valid altitude does is an indispensable element of creating ambience.
    Admitted, the fittest and strongest team may have some genius and have more abilities nevertheless nothing is expected to beat a team, possessing proper altitude and team spirit.


    2楼2012-09-12 15:04
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      这是题目
      Some people argue that the fittest and strongest individuals and teams can achieve the greatest success in sports. But other people think the success is much related to the mental attitude. Discuss both views and give your opinion.


      3楼2012-09-12 15:05
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        求帮助.


        4楼2012-09-12 15:09
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          有人帮忙吗~!


          5楼2012-09-12 15:13
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