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Dedicated in the works, she has serialized the stories on XXX for X years without even one pause.大家爱天野娘为的是那份敬业吧,擅自改意思的话勿怪。
Fans thus nicknamed her as “Auntie Tianye”. 天野娘这个样子翻会不会好一点
I really think that she is a lovely person. However, the pity is that she seldom …… or meets…….
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5.……Mafia. The plot revolves around the growth of Tsunayoshi Sawada and
his family members. One day an infant hitman called Reborn calls on Tsuna’s and
offers to be his tutor, aiming to transform the ever a good-for-nothing into a
perfect 10th boss of Vongola Family.

6.……shows……the value of friendship and the importance of positive attitudes towards life through lines.
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7. To tell you the truth, originally I wasn’t attracted by this manga at all since the images didn’t look beautiful enough and the stories seemed to be boring. As time goes by, this idea has changed. With the more delicate style and the clearer framework, the story has become so interesting and even made my blood boil. I understood that it was the one that I would truly love forever.(或许关于给自己的启示还可以多谈点?目前为止说服力不是很强的说)
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8. A few weeks ago, “H R”, the one accompanied as I grow up, has embraced its final episode. When I sank into depression, it was “R” that always gave me energy and cheered me up. Even now I can still remember the feeling when I was waiting for the update.(feeling,具体点?) I believe that the story of the Vongola and the link between us will never fade away. (表决心略突兀)
时间有限的话,天野娘的介绍建议只取敬业随和并被粉丝昵称为天野娘即可。重点是,个人感受应该更具体一点,听众愿意听到演讲者心底的声音,也只有这样才能更好地引起共鸣】


IP属地:江苏本楼含有高级字体16楼2012-11-27 23:57
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    这贴子如果让K仔这只驻美时差党看到,会给你带来巨大帮助的


    来自手机贴吧17楼2012-11-28 00:17
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      可怕好巧我刚好戳进来了QAQ


      18楼2012-11-28 05:52
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        天野明用Akira Amano,其他日文词也不要用拼音,用罗马音


        19楼2012-11-28 05:58
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          唉~虽然在国外,但是很讨厌英文~你要是写出来,倒是可以给些建议啥的~


          20楼2012-11-28 09:14
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            19L神奇时差党满足你一切要求!_(:з」∠)_


            21楼2012-11-28 10:19
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              貌似一年前就看见过这样的帖子......


              23楼2012-11-28 18:01
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                我是渣渣、、


                24楼2012-11-28 18:10
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                  19L满足你。


                  来自Android客户端27楼2012-11-30 06:35
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                    还是写manga吧...comic神马的让人一下就觉得是美国漫画神马的。我们这里图书馆单位架子都是分成manga很多comic的哈哈


                    来自手机贴吧28楼2012-11-30 13:45
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                      那只K仔可以满足你的一切需求【泥垢
                      英语水平大概还没有楼主好【打滚


                      IP属地:北京29楼2012-11-30 23:17
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                        啊我英文不好虽然说学了4年= =
                        我知道有个人能帮你 @keithee
                        不过我不知道那货会不会帮你= =
                        等等我帮你修改看看 不过我能力很差= =


                        IP属地:丹麦30楼2012-12-02 05:53
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                          我觉得caricatures是不是有点用的不恰当……comic或者animation更加好哦?说不定是anima……
                          其实很多单词换一个位置就能得到新的意思 不妨试试看恩
                          标点也很重要 标点有停顿作用 注意停顿恩
                          对了我到底在说什么一点用有没有啊啊啊啊……别相信我说的恩……


                          IP属地:丹麦31楼2012-12-02 05:59
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                            没听说过度娘有一种东西叫翻译器么- -+


                            32楼2012-12-02 08:25
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                              啊哈哈英语不好的路过,演讲是神马东东,我连句子都说不顺~


                              33楼2012-12-02 11:51
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