不是考试作文哦,是给喜欢的女孩的一段话。
希望能帮忙修改修改。
语病也行,好句子也行,谢谢了。
This time, I didn't feel upset when the reality strongly struck to me. I had already known these things will happen at last. Therefore I'm calm without disappointment, and I think "Anyhow life will go on, whether you are full of sadness or not. So why not face it in peace."I'm glad that you appeared in my life during my best ages, as a bunch of sunshine bursts into the darkness. Both of us will be a better person for now and in the future, I always believe firmly.
希望能帮忙修改修改。
语病也行,好句子也行,谢谢了。
This time, I didn't feel upset when the reality strongly struck to me. I had already known these things will happen at last. Therefore I'm calm without disappointment, and I think "Anyhow life will go on, whether you are full of sadness or not. So why not face it in peace."I'm glad that you appeared in my life during my best ages, as a bunch of sunshine bursts into the darkness. Both of us will be a better person for now and in the future, I always believe firmly.