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Title:Disappear of hometowns
I used to think that some words like Disappear are entirely human ideas. The word, Disappear, as an example, never exists in the system of nature because things in the nature never disappear. The sun seems to sink in the ocean in darkness, but it raises in another hemisphere; the food in our plates is eaten and gone forever, but it exists in the form of our blood, our bones and our bodies; the ruins of a city fall, but they are used to form more magnificent structures, even when they are destroyed into dust, there is dust left. However, I found myself vastly wrong when I saw the debris of a group of ancient buildings in my home town.
These buildings had been here even before my grand-grandmother’s born and were loaded with memories of generations. The presence of these buildings has even become one part of the word hometown for most of the people here. I am afraid of the disappear of my hometown because when I look at the models of the new buildings on the sand table, I don’t see magnificent structures even they are well-designed, I don’t see a better hometown, I see another Shanghai, another Beijing, another random modern city I am not familiar with. My hometown is disappearing, not even into dust, but into nothing.
This city is expanding based on destroying. Actually, it is what all the cities in the world are doing, isn’t it? Modernization is just an excuse, our infinite desire is what drives us to ignore or despise what is disappearing. One day, all the hometowns will be pulled by our desire into the same pattern; one day, old places will finally only exist in the memory of old people, or better, struggle to survive as tourist attractions; one day, travelling will become meaningless because when you get off the train or plane, the only thing you will find different is the name of station or airport.
When this day came finally, the time will keep flowing but the history would stop. You may think that it is impossible to happen in real world, but it is undeniable that when the size of city is expanding in such a dramatic speed, the space for history to be written down is compressed into for***ike museums. Even countries with history of thousands of years like Greece and Rome, are enclosed in a cage called World Cultural Heritage.
At the end of the speech, I want to cite the words from a famous writer: accept the inferno and become such a part, or seek and learn to recognize who and what, in the midst of the inferno, are not inferno, then make them endure, give them space.


IP属地:加拿大1楼2013-02-19 00:05回复

    City of memory
    The old man threw the box on the floor. His roaring made me frowned and walked faster. However, when the sound of frustrating of the delicate box and the howling of the old man broke out at the same time, I could not help to look back. When our eyes met, I felt that I was struck by the lightning. He was my father. His skin was my father’s skin, darker than the soil and rougher than the tree bark; his eyes were my father’s eyes, full of bloodshot due to lack of sleep and fight with his fate; his sorrow was my father’s sorrow, and his anger was my father’s anger. Grieving which due to the loss of something precious made him wanted to change the fate, but there’s nothing he could do, so he became angry. However, the fire of anger could not melt the iceberg of sadness but made the man more suffering. I cannot forget how profound my father’s emotion was, like this, a mixture of anger and sadness, at mother’s funeral—a mixture of anger and sadness, just like this old man.
    But I was wrong. I must be wrong. There is Aldam, not my hometown. Besides, it was me who watched his ashes swept into the sea by the winds.
    It must dust that blinded my sight. But how could you let it blind your eyes of reason? I said to myself and forced myself to walk away. Thereafter, I had been surrounded by scenes of the past and couldn’t stop thinking of my father. The wall of reason was softened by my tears, completely.
    It had been three weeks after I arrived at Aldam. I was completely lost myself, lost myself in the world of sense and sensibility. After the forgather with my “father”, I met my “grandmother”. She was calling her cat. Possible due to the dusky light of the nightfall, her eyes seemed to be full of sadness. Besides this, the girl who was selling flowers in the early morning resembled a friend from my adolescency who had killed herself due to the loss of love; the running boy fall and I raised him up and he was my little brother. He would love to run like this if he was still alive. All the memories of the past came flooding back, uncontrollable. The only thing that made me a little bit relived was that, at least, he was smiling.
    I thought I was crazy or dead already.
    Did this city even exist? Or just a nightmare of mine. If I could only met dead people in this city, than I shall call it heaven or hell instead?
    Oh my memories, and deep sorrow, drove me sweeping, suffering, struggling, and could not stop recollecting.
    I thought I was crazy or dead already.
    However, years of travel didn’t mean nothing. I still could think. I still have reason, and strong will to help me to think: Supposed that Aldam was city that exists in reality, then if I keep stating at them, the similar faces would disappear finally, and show me the faces behind the masks.
    I was surprised by my courage when I opened the door of the philosopher’s house. I fixed my on one him, and his eyes. His eyes were so blue and full of sorrow. He wasn’t even surprised by my abrupt behavior. He just stared at me with his beautiful and sad eyes. It seemed that he wanted me to recognize him, or wanted to recognize me as if he hadn’t recognized me.


    IP属地:加拿大2楼2013-02-19 00:07
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      “My, husband.” when these words came out of my mouse finally, I turned away from him. I was afraid that I would cry out and my memory and tears would be out of control.
      “I knew what brought you here. Ask, my lonely farer, my lost child, if you got any questions.”
      “Am I dead? Or alive? Or crazy?”
      “You are not dead, not crazy either. You are just aged.”
      “Aged? My hair is as sleek as silk. Although weeping has made my eyes swollen, I can still count the number of leaves of a tree. Not even mentioned my brain, dear philosopher.”
      “Your body is still young, but you have as much memory as a person in the autumn of his life. The number of dead people you known is far over the number of the living ones. Your heart is full of memory. It is too heavy to accept new faces. Every new face you meet, you put a mask on him or her without realizing. Thus they alive in the form of the old ones. Children are the easiest ones to feel happy in Aldam as they don’t have much memory. They are still making memory.”
      “So, Aldam is not the heaven of reunion, bur the hell, full of marshes of memory. People lost themselves here, struggling with their senses and sensibilities. They are distressed due to the loss of something precious and made them wanted to change, but there’s nothing they could do as the past is a place one can never go back, so they become angry. Then, both the fire of anger and the iceberg of sadness make people more and more suffering.”
      “My lonely farer, the next city is waiting for you.”
      When I left Aldam, I passed the lane when I met my ‘Father”. The fragments of the delicate box were still there, lying quietly and beautifully. I picked up one of them as a souvenir of Aldam. Suddenly, another thought came across my mind--Maybe my memories was too much for me, but without something precious, even the box was delicate, it cannot escape from the fate of broken.
      Goodbye, the city of memory! I watched Aldam to disappear below the horizontal level, and hugged myself. It felt like that my father was hugging me. Then I smiled, for the first of these days.


      IP属地:加拿大3楼2013-02-19 00:07
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        A new beginning
        It was a mild, serene, midsummer’s night—the sky was without a cloud, and the winds were
        whist.
        Alex was hiding in the dark, stroking his sword, and staring at the castle which was no far away
        from here. However, he preferred people to call him Prince Alex instead of Alex, which used to be
        his address, but longer was after the assassination of his father, King Adam. The person behind the
        assassination was the present king, who was the one Alex wanted to kill tonight.
        At the moment, Alex could not be able restrain to recollect the past. The first scene he thought of
        was the morning that he found the King and Queen was killed at bed. They were poisoned as there
        were not signs of struggle. He would think that they were sleeping if their faces were not
        dreadfully pale, like fresh creatures made by the God. Miraculously, he escaped from the killers.
        He would never forget how despaired and helpless he was. When he ran across the crowed he
        heard people acclaimed” Long live the new King” and then he gave up the idea of looking for
        help.
        He ran into the forest and then settled. “It was fate that let me survive, and fight to create
        vengeance.”the young Alex said to himself. “I had already died once, and all my hope is a new
        beginning of my new life, as a King.” The life in forest was like a hell for Alex, or Prince Alex.
        All these years, he fighted so hard that he thought that he was not even alive after the
        assassination.
        He fighted so hard because he knew that he could never be alive in real sense if he could not finish
        the revenge and start his new life. He considered himself as a phoenix. He kept waiting for the
        time for reborning from ashes.
        “And tonight, is the moment” Alex slipped into the castle. As he arrived at the bedroom for King
        and Queen, he almost lost his control of savagery when he saw the killer of his parents, the
        destroyer of his life, was sleeping soundly at the place where he found his parent’s bodies. He
        pierced their hearts by his sword with no hesitation. The next morning, when the sun raised till the
        top of the church, he sweared in front the Pope as King Alex and showed his loyalty. When he
        heard people singing“Now the old king is dead and long live the King.” , he felt the sunlight has
        never been brighter before. He felt himself like a neonatus, a phoenix, and ready for his new
        beginning.
        Possibly due to the dazzling sunlight, he didn’t see a young man in the crowed who was like the
        young Alex, seeking for a new beginning.


        IP属地:加拿大4楼2013-02-19 00:08
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          Discriptive writing 1
          Gradually, everything becomes clear. You get the feeling of acquaintance but you are sure that you
          have never been here. What you see is flickering like scenes in an old movie and shrouded in gray
          mist. You are all on your own, and you find a black cat is staring at you ferociously with her
          flittering eyes. You are not frightened. You think it is inauspicious instead.
          Rain is sobbing like a wronged child. Every dark night and rainy day like this, you hope there’s
          someone could accompany you through it, but you have forgotten when you became lonely all the
          time. Maybe it begins with the leave of your last grandchild. You look back, and find there’s too
          much fresh green years you’ve left behind. You also find the boy who celebrated every festival
          and birthday, looking forward to every tomorrow is even ridiculous.
          You think you should go home so you keep walking in a pace an old man should has, but you
          know that there’s nothing at home waiting for you. A home without any family number is not even
          a real home. It’s just a house, you think, an empty house.
          In the crowd of strangers, your loneliness is submerged then buried. At the same time, you find the
          weed of loneliness is growing on your heart.
          Then everything becomes obscured, and you wake up, finding the lonely moonlight in your lonely
          window.


          IP属地:加拿大5楼2013-02-19 00:10
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            cxr:oO&A@&9GCb2013/02/19 03:30
            以前一直不相信网络上有真情,直到我把我老婆抱回家后才改变这个想法。只要真心,缘分到了,不管是网络还是现实,你都能找到你的另一半。长期以来,感恩贴吧以及众多的吧友对我的熏陶和栽培。此次得天眷顾不敢独享。把和我老婆认识的网站给大家分享。有心的吧友可以上去了解一下,说不定你的另一半也正在那儿等着你。
            地址:w-ww.677-518.co-m(去掉 - 就是网站地址)
            吐锎捩


            来自手机贴吧6楼2013-02-19 03:31
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              Name: Klaveir Class name: Auston
              Title: descriptive writing about Pike’s fish market
              To escape from the regular life, I get on one train in dark and get off when the timid
              approach of twilight becomes perceptible. When I reach the fish market, the cold
              darkness has just melted away, dissolved into the moistness of the wind, teardrops of
              the flowers, blink on the surface of the water, and glories of the dawn. This scene
              reminds me the famous painting of the sunrise by Monet.
              Vaguely, I hear the singing by a busker, which sounds like an aged ballad from a fairy
              tale. With the song, the first shop opens, then the first consumer comes, then the first
              fish is sold. Soon the market is full of people. I cannot hear the song anymore, neither
              see the blink of the ocean nor smell the moisture in the air. Instead, I see a bustling
              fish market, filled with people with eyes bright; I smell the perfumes of women in the
              air, as well as sweat of fishermen, blood of fish, salt of sea breeze and all the smells
              mixed with particles of dust by the sunlight fill the market like filling a balloon;
              however, if this balloon could finally fly, it is not due to the smell but the sound
              instead. Music played by the buskers, sounds of struggling made by the fish, all the
              bargaining, chatting, and cheering, all these sounds make the atmosphere here delight
              and light.
              The cheering is made by tourists when they see the Pike’s-fish-market-man’s
              specialty which is throwing and catching fish like a basketball. I prefer to consider it
              as such a cruel behavior because when the fish is always still alive when it is thrown
              and caught. The fish curves as parabola and their faces keep flashing in front me. The
              reflection of light of their scales reminds me the coldness of knife and makes me
              uncomfortable. As a result, I can only pretend I don’t see them; I pretend that I can
              only see the reflection of light on people’s happy faces.
              All the sound and smell and changing light and shadow fade away with women’s
              floral printed dresses, and the balloon deflates as the sun sinks below the horizon. The
              last fish is sold, the last consumer goes and the last shop closes. I could hear the
              busker again, hear his ballad of ancient in a forgotten tongue.


              IP属地:加拿大7楼2013-02-19 22:28
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                Haiku!!!
                Dirty naughty dog
                Hope if you was here tonight
                This lonely long night.
                What is behind your-
                Velvet rope, Mona Lisa,
                As well as your smile?
                A star is in love
                With Sun, for thousands of years
                Without meeting once.
                Viva la Vida
                Glad to hear the triumph, I would-
                Dance, if I’m not dying.
                To start a new life
                I think I’ll go to Boston,
                Leave this all behind.
                When flowers gazing
                Ring is given, will you say,
                Yes I do, I do


                IP属地:加拿大8楼2013-02-26 20:22
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                  这是什么东东。。。?


                  IP属地:泰国10楼2013-03-05 18:09
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                    With spring
                    approaching, time is softened by the gentle breeze in the afternoon. Flowers
                    are swaying in the wind, filling the world with their purple shadows. And the
                    seeds are travelling, without a destination, waiting for the first rain to wake
                    them up, and give them life, just like what you used be.
                    Afternoon in early
                    spring like this cannot be more common. It looks like someday in the past as
                    well someday in the future. May be the only difference between these afternoons
                    is nothing but time changes. Sakuras are burning under the sun, as gorgeous as
                    they can be. They are blooming and fading in a speed you cannot calculate out
                    but just inertia. Blooming and fading, they are like a midnight train loaded
                    with the past, chasing the time and hurtling past. When you close your eyes, you
                    could even hear the sound of the years passing. How about the people with you? You
                    still remember someone once told you that Sakuras are actually butterflies,
                    flying over mountains and rivers from Japan days, flying across nights
                    from the ancient time, and coming here for a short rest. You still remember you
                    guys separated part under the tree, and all the promises broken when the
                    flowers on the wane. Each of you becomes a lonely child, still like watching Sakuras
                    but alone.


                    IP属地:加拿大11楼2013-03-29 21:07
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