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找别扭,语法不好!!!!

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刚有感而发造了个句
to give my best wishes to everyone who still carries even a little tiny hope and (who)? has been waiting for the turning points of their lives after suffering through all the misfortune as the one I just got saved from.


1楼2013-03-05 17:38回复
    去掉开头的to吧,还有句末的那个as the one


    IP属地:重庆来自手机贴吧2楼2013-03-05 17:45
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