【蜻蜓永随bie】130309为bie写的一篇英语文章

To my love
When I was a little girl,I saw you. I didn't like you. I thought you are not cute and has a little ugly. But now ，you are my love.
Bie，my love.I love you because you are nice.Your smile can make me happy.I didn't like you two year ago. because I am stupid. Now I'm clever and I love you.
You are 27 years old ,I'm 14 years old. I'm younger than you, but you are better than me. Your sound is the best sound in the world. When I listen your songs,I'm in a beautiful place, just like fly to the sky. when I see your photos, I just see a boy who are the cutest. lf I see you every day, my heart already fall in the lake.
Bie, my love, I love you fever, don't you?

可能有些语法不太对，请大家修正

“When I listen your songs”应该是“When I listen to your songs”

我也写过一篇，只是那时不敢交给老师！

Dear Bie! please promise me call you like it .the first time I see you is in your TV play ,but I didn't like you ,

because I really like P'PONG that time .but later on, I watched STONE Heart ,it has really changed ,I start loving you !

and then I begin to listen to your songs !care about every thing of you .My student laugh at me ,they said that I was

and then I begin to listen to your songs !care about every thing of you .My student laugh at me ,they said that I was

To my love
When I was a little girl,I saw you. I didn't like you. I thought you are not cute and has a little ugly. But now ，you are my love.
Bie，my love.I love you because you are nice.Your smile can make me happy.I didn't like you two year ago. because I am stupid. Now I'm clever and I love you.
You are 27 years old ,I'm 14 years old. I'm younger than you, but you are better than me. Your sound is the best sound in the world. When I listen your songs,I'm in a beautiful place, just like fly to the sky. when I see your photos, I just see a boy who are the cutest. lf I see you every day, my heart already fall in the lake.
Bie, my love, I love you fever, don't you? 这是我们宝写的吗？

childish .I just said they couldn't understand me !In my heart ,you are perfect though that's wrong .so maybe in