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【初三党求助】帮忙评价和修改一下这篇杂志投稿文章。

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学校杂志要求投稿,就胡乱写了一篇悲惨世界的影评。希望各位帮忙看看改改。感激不尽了。


1楼2013-03-25 22:04回复

    Les Miserables,A Song of Love and Hope.
    “Somewhere beyond the barricade is there a world you long to see?Do
    you hear the people sing,Say do you hear the distant drums,There is a life
    about to start when tomorrow comes.”
    Whenever I recall this,I just can’t stop being moved and excited.


    2楼2013-03-25 22:05
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      This movie is mainly talking about the things that happened in the darkest age of
      France:The poor was being bled by the rich.The folk were afraid of the
      government,The revolutionaries just kept fighting for the new age and the only
      thing they can got was failure because the people in that age just cared about
      how to live and how much money the can make.And how the escaped prisoner saved
      himself by loving someone else against hating this world.


      3楼2013-03-25 22:06
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        But I think it’s not my duty to tell you what happened in this
        movie,Sharing my own emotions with you guys is what I’m about to do.
        At first I was afraid that I can not finish watching this movie
        because every character in this movie just talks with each other by singing.It’s
        just like a magnificent opera that is just moved from the theatre to the big
        screen.But after watching this movie patiently.I was just moved deeply.
        I just can’t stop recalling every scene of this movie.The death of
        Fantine,The revolution of the young,The love between Cosette and Marius and so
        on.Every scene of this movie just moves me a lot.


        4楼2013-03-25 22:06
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          Although that age was dark,there is still a flame lighting up the
          darkness.Although these young revolutionaries were meant to fail and even lose
          their beautiful lives with limitless possibilities,they just did not give up
          the love and hope to the new age.
          I think everything of this movie is about one theme,The Greatest
          love after the extremest sadness.And this is why everyone who has watched this
          movie just can’t stop being moved by this great epic of Love and Hope.
          Les Miserables,a great movie,lets me see the world of freedom and
          love and lets me hear the song of Love and Hope in tears.


          5楼2013-03-25 22:06
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            7楼2013-03-25 22:19
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              有些字可以斟酌,避免重复使用,使之更具有文学性。


              9楼2013-03-25 22:21
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                10楼2013-03-25 22:27
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                  不错


                  11楼2013-03-25 22:45
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                    已经很厉害啦,当然翻译好的同时还需要多学习影评的写法,加油加油


                    IP属地:浙江来自手机贴吧14楼2013-03-26 00:44
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                      15楼2013-03-27 00:10
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