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明天英语老师生日,求大神看看这段话有没有地方错了

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来自Android客户端1楼2013-03-30 21:51回复
    to dear English teacher
    just “happy birthday to you”,l know this gift is nothing ,Although there is no beautiful flowers ,but this is my heart
    l wish you a perpetual youth!


    来自Android客户端2楼2013-03-30 21:54
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      敬爱的英语老师
      仅仅一句生日快乐,我知道这点礼物算不了什么,虽然没有美丽的鲜花,但是这也是我的一番心意。
      祝你青春永驻!


      来自Android客户端3楼2013-03-30 21:56
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        你犯了一个大错误哟亲!有although 在你就不能用but!


        来自手机贴吧4楼2013-03-30 21:57
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          送给英语老师。怕语法出错,求大神纠正


          来自Android客户端5楼2013-03-30 21:57
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            目测楼主初中。although不能与but连用。


            来自手机贴吧6楼2013-03-30 21:59
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              there are no beautiful flowers,flower你用了复数哟


              来自手机贴吧7楼2013-03-30 22:04
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                亲爱的英语老师:my dear English teacher.


                来自手机贴吧8楼2013-03-30 22:05
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                  恩...个人认为你用just a word that happy birthday to you is noting更好一点


                  来自手机贴吧9楼2013-03-30 22:05
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                    - - 我觉得最后一句怪怪的。。。 不用I好吧。。。。。 好吧,,我乱说的


                    IP属地:北京10楼2013-03-30 22:12
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                      this is gift without beautiful flowers,but my best wish in card


                      来自手机贴吧11楼2013-03-30 22:12
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                        Dear English teacher
                        Lhappy birthday to you, a little cannot stands for all love and thanks to you , Flowers are beautiful ,and you are more beautiful than them in our eyes.
                        best wishes.


                        来自Android客户端12楼2013-03-30 22:13
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                          刚才我注意到最后一句,为什么不写I wish you have a perpetual youth 或者I wish your youth is perpetual 我愿你青春永恒


                          来自手机贴吧13楼2013-03-30 22:17
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                            好像没有注意到标点符号。个人觉得,这也是我的一番心意。
                            翻译成:this is my heart有点中式英语了。


                            14楼2013-03-30 22:28
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                              LZ写的是中式英语
                              Mrs.XXX
                              Happy Birthday! Thank you for everything you have done for us and I cannot imagin what my school life could be without you. It's a shame not having been able to present you a gift or something, but I believe that it is my sincerity that matters most. Anyway,Happy Birthday!
                              Frankly Yours
                              XXX


                              IP属地:巴基斯坦15楼2013-03-30 22:33
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