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【云微萱依】Unttainble

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可以当fiction来看,但是一定要记得是based on real story.
英文帖 求评论求纠错。
(其实有人好好看下来就不错了。)


IP属地:上海1楼2013-04-12 20:43回复
    先@后发帖。大概明天会一更。
    @墨色林海


    IP属地:上海2楼2013-04-12 20:48
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      2025-06-08 08:21:13
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      英文白痴飘过。。汝在说什么。。


      来自Android客户端3楼2013-04-12 21:37
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        魂淡突然发现忘记发文了= =


        IP属地:上海4楼2013-04-14 19:01
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          Unattainable.
          The word approximately equals flawlessness or perfection. It is, truly, an uncanny phenomenon.
          I don’t know where we will end up. Two continents, the Pacific Ocean, 13 hours tine zone. Maybe someday we just stopped playing Harry Potter chain game, maybe we stopped reminding each other
          the closest festival, or maybe we merely get defeated by the distance.
          Uncertainty.
          I close my eyes. I see you standing therein the light, blocking the afternoon sun; only leave the halo around you. Brightness softens your figure. In my eyes, in my pupils, on my retinas.
          I recall your eyelashes brushing my hair,your lips on my eyelid, and your nose tip against my forehead. Sensations burst out, like it was yesterday. Or it’s just your mails popping on the screenreminds me of you constantly.
          Either way, I like the sense of you not being far away.
          I’d really like to build a time machine.
          And, yes, I know it’s too much of cliché.
          And, yes, I know you will make fun of me for being so sentimental, plus a little satisfaction of being written. I can almost visualize it right now that you sitting in front of your desktop, smirking.


          IP属地:上海5楼2013-04-14 19:15
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            You asked me why I was writing a diary but didn’t care you were absolutely capable of see my writings. I answered playfully that you couldn’t read Chinese anyway so what’s the point of hiding?
            You asked when we could set off to the square.
            I really couldn’t think why my mother has left the room with total ease and
            agreed to let me go with you guys. It was so not her. ” wait till I finish
            writing, only a moment. Besides you can do something else to kill the time,” I
            said,”I mean except staring at me writing something you can’t even understand.”
            “I like to watch you when your inspiration strikes you.” You sat on the bed, cuddling my pillow for fun.
            “Thank you?” I said a bit awkwardly.
            After a brief moment I was still thinking about what just happened and was dragged out of the mood of composing, put down the pen and off we went to the square.


            IP属地:上海6楼2013-04-14 19:43
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              To Be Contimue________________________________________________________________


              IP属地:上海7楼2013-04-14 19:43
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                @墨色林海
                在这里做一些说明。
                1.这些事情是乱序的;
                2.一楼一个片段。


                IP属地:上海8楼2013-04-14 19:46
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                  2025-06-08 08:15:13
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                  还在纠结要不要给男主角看一下的问题……可是我怕给他看了会笑我= =然后跟上次我送他生日礼物一样很自豪很自豪= =
                  擦。到底要不要给他看啊魂淡???!!!!


                  IP属地:上海9楼2013-04-14 19:49
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                    = =额嘻,基本上一句话只能看懂一半的单词


                    10楼2013-04-14 20:00
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                      wow你头像= =


                      IP属地:上海11楼2013-04-14 20:15
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                        看不懂QAQ。。汝是怎么学英语的求指点。


                        来自Android客户端12楼2013-04-14 20:37
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                          看不懂???顺道新人冒泡求认识!


                          IP属地:浙江来自iPad13楼2013-04-20 19:18
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                            刚看了《霍金的故事》斗志被彻底激励了……不知道是演员还是配乐还是霍金本身的问题感动得一塌糊涂。
                            Maybe it's just Cumberbatch. Love is simple, really. You feel happy when he laughs, feel goddamn heartbroken when he stumbles, even feel particularly well when he says "bang!". You imagine what happens when collapse reverses, "bang!"he said. You think about what will happen to the left 3 degrees. The radiation is all around us,150 million years old. For a brief moment I seriously thought about becoming a theoretical physicist or a cosmologist. It's because of Cumberbatch and I know it.
                            (以上这段肯定渣啊没有Word亲亲改过。大致算是我对BC的爱~还有对霍金~)
                            那啥下周期中考了大家好运&明天不出意外会更文~


                            IP属地:上海14楼2013-04-20 21:16
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                              2025-06-08 08:09:13
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                              @墨色林海 @月光是谁的伤 @蒋赛冰


                              IP属地:上海15楼2013-04-20 21:17
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