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The Power
of Praise
In our
daily life, we always meet some situations of some trouble and
difficultly. The power of praise can make something different. (Take my own experience for example).
Last
week, I failed the exam. I was so sad that I made more mistakes after that. Then
I was afraid of exam(s)
and study. My teacher realized my feeling and asked me to get her office. She
gave me a big smile and said,
“don’t worry too much about the exam. Although you didn’t pass the exam, you
can work hard and get a good grades next exam, you are a very good
child.” I was so moved that I decided to face the difficulty and get through
it.
Thank her
for praise, I have a confidence in the exam. I think it is the best
experience in
my life and it can influence my future. How strong the power of
praise is!

……苦逼的排版。

ask me to get her office.改成ask me to go to her office
a good grades 变成 a good grade （这是个大问题啊！！）
confidence 不要加a
最后感叹句 prise 前面加个 the
【以上为某位老师改】