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【求助】关于雅思写作……

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由于大学要求4个6.5,已经考了三次。
2.16
听力 7.5 阅读 6.5 口语 6.5 写作 6
5.18
听力 8 阅读 7 口语 6.5 写作 6
5.25
听力 7.5 阅读 6.5 口语 7 写作 6
真的很需要在雅思写作方面的帮助……我就是差着0.5就可以进那个大学了啊
求帮助!


1楼2013-06-15 05:17回复
    可能漏了点信息……
    我明天还会再考一次。下一次考试时间是定在了7.6
    大学的deadline是7.25
    谢谢各位了!
    求点建议……
    下面是我的几篇写作……


    2楼2013-06-15 05:19
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      Q:The best way for a country to prepare for the future is to invest more resources in young people. Do you agree or disagree? In what ways should the country invest in young people?
      The fierce competitions between countries force the governments look for a way to prepare for their tomorrows. Meanwhile, youngsters are normally recognized as the future of a country. Some point out that it would be help for a better country if governments put more resources in youth. From my point of view, such investments could be in education and public health.
      First of all, supporting free primary and secondary education would help. As all we know, education is not only the foundation of a country, but have profound influences in lives. After being educated, youngsters would have more skills, as a result, the society would work in a higher efficiency. Investing in education would also allow science and technologies develop faster. Japan, for example, the government has invested a great amount resources in education since the end of the World War II because they always believe that education is the cheapest national defence. Up to now, scientist from Japan have a wide range contributions in field like natural science (such as genetic programmes) and technologies (such as electrical paper and the industry of photography).
      Furthermore, there should also have some preparation in healthcare. A saying says that health is the only personal capital for all further developments. Government should not just invest in prevention of some diseases for children, but the definition of the healthy lifestyle should also be included. The case of smoking could be an example. Many years ago, people might not recognize the danger that the behaviour of smoking would bring. However, in recent decades, scientist pointed out that there were enormous amount of carcinogens containing in cigarette. Many students were shown the comparison between a health lung and the lung of a smoker so that they were no longer considering smoking as a behaviour of maturation. It does contributes in decreasing the number of lung cancer.
      There are also many fields that governments should invest in. However, education and healthcare as fundamental factors of life, should be paid attention.


      4楼2013-06-15 05:24
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        It is generally believed that some people are born with
        certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However,
        it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports
        person or musician.
        Discuss both these views and
        give your own opinion.
        Q:The issue of how to reach the top level of some fields is great interest of social as a whole. Some people suggest that training is the best way for them to reach while other believe that if they have no born talent in those fields, they are impossible to be the best.
        Talent is very important. People with these talents would be easier to reach those achievements that others might never arrive. Many proofs in the real life show that God only bestows certain talents to some individuals while others do not have that luck. However,talent is not the only factor of success. It has some effects however if a person reach those achievements, since then they just lie on what they get,they would be easily overstepped.
        Training makes normal become good and perfect become great. It has much stronger effect than passion. Because passion or interest allow people to concentrate on what they like but the dreams and desires are transformed to the fact by practising. If a person is provided a scientific method of training, he can get the best result. By training and regular practice, anyone can gradually control the weakness and enhance the strength. Secondly, a man with the talent gifted from God is unlikely to become a star without practice. There was a story about a child with inborn talent in China. He was so clever that he was able to write those beautiful and elegant poems when he was just five years old. However, without further learning, he became a normal person in his twenties. Hence, it proofs the saying that practise makes perfect.
        In short, talent are just the catalyst to success but training is the deciding factors of being at the top of a field.


        5楼2013-06-15 05:36
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