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【原创短篇文】Lord Of the Flies----Into the Future

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嘛。。鄙人第一次写英语小说什么的。
语法上的错误。。往在场英语好的大神们纠正·~
恩。。
那就开始发文了= =


1楼2013-06-23 01:30回复

    (Encounter)
    In the morning, Ralph walked into the "Heart of Sigh" cafe, bought a middle cup Cappuccino, sat on the side of the window, watched outside many people comes and go, slowly sank into the memories.
    He got rescue ten years ago, he grow up and become an emergency doctor. He used his hand to save more people. he wanted to let them have a good life. Not like his friends already has no chance to get their lives or happiness. He still remembers his best friends Piggy's died. He went to piggy's aunt home before. Piggy's aunt was a very kind and strong woman. Piggy's aunt looks very sad but she also said she very glad Piggy has a friend, because this child have asthma, can't do a lot of things, no one made friends with him, Piggy really want a friend in his life. Ralph still remembers Piggy's aunt's words and Piggy with his on the island the memories. He went to jewelry’s store and pay money to let them made a small conch necklace before. Now he is always wear on his neck, to keep remind himself what he have done on that island.


    2楼2013-06-23 01:33
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      "Hey! What a coincidence! I was just thinking about you, now you just appear!" A bright red color hair and wear a black suit man, "May I sit here?" the man hold a larger cup of black coffee and a red color laptop asked.
      "Sure!" Ralph replied. Ralph smile gently and said "Long time no see, Jack."
      Now, Jack is the richest person in his country, but he also is a philanthropist. I think maybe have a lot of people will doubt how a dark, brutal, selfish man become a philanthropist. Let me tell you why. When he was get rescue after, in this ten years he experience a lot, learned a lot. He always thoughts a lot about that island many things and he have done.


      3楼2013-06-23 01:34
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        At one night, he suddenly realize on that island the things what he made it happened is how terrible. He slowly recalled a boy he killed its named Simon and indirect killed Piggy. He can imagine what hopelessness is Simon’s face and recalled Piggy hold the conch fall off the cliff. A kind of emotion was called Guilt started to grow up in his heart and walked into his mind. The guilt let to him always insomnia. He finally found a way to relief himself guilt. It's to donate money to help needy people. Yes! This is a charity! For a long time he kept do charity and made a charity organization, a lot of people called him is the most goodness philanthropist.
        But only Jack himself knew the truth, he's not goodness person. He just wanted to relief his guilt. He still has one hard to forget and forgive things. He wanted a man to forgive him. If he didn't get forgive from this man, he never can forget the guilt and forgive himself. This man we all know, he's name is Ralph.
        Jack asked "How have you been?" When he met Ralph that moment, he didn't know what to say. When the words out, he felt a little regret. He knew Ralph was good, he became a famous emergency doctor, had a lot of girls and women adore him, before had a very famous talent scout invited him to became an actor and said will give him high salary, but Ralph refused it.


        4楼2013-06-23 01:35
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          "Pretty Good" Ralph very elegant drank a mouthful coffee and then he smiled said: "When I heard you became a philanthropist, I’m really doubt it. Now seems is true." Ralph has a little complicated emotion, but it quickly back quiet again. Ralph relieved and forgive the Jake. After all, at that time himself and Jack were both young, didn't really understand what's right, what's wrong, and didn't know how to control ourselves evil side or other kind emotion side. So they chose to not admit or afraid to face the real self/ lie to self.
          On Jack's face showed a little sad with guilt smile and said:"I come here, it be want to talk to you about ten years ago things." In Ralph's eyes emerge a little surprised, he nodded his head let Jack kept to saying.
          “Ten years ago, on that island I made a lot of terrible things. Sorry for I killed Piggy and Simon without felt guilt." Jack choked with sobs a little while, “in this ten years, I always insomnia, when I closed my eyes, Simon's hopeless face and Piggy hold in conch fell into cliff that always showed up in my mind. Piggy's died was I indirectly caused. Although these years held many times charity active, still can't relief my guilt."


          5楼2013-06-23 01:37
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            Jack's face became serious: "One day, I finally realize why I can't relief my guilt, because my guilt is about you. Now, I only want your forgive. Please forgive me!" Jack stand up and then 90° bowing in apology.
            Ralph quiet a long time, he serious said to him:" I forgive you already have a long time. I also have wrong, at that time I didn't feel what you felt. I'm sorry."
            Jake's eyes became a little moisten. He finally felt relief from guilt. He saw his watch, said: "Oh… Already 12:30 afternoon, do you feel starving?"
            Ralph gently smile and said:" yea, I also feel a little hungry. We don't realize the time passed so very quickly...."
            "Ha...Today my treat, what do you want to eat?" Jack bright smiled.
            "Chinese food" Ralph wear on the coat and said, "No spicy"
            "Okay, Let’ go" Jack said "My housekeeper will drive car take us to the "The Last Blossom" restaurant."
            In the end, they walk out cafe.
            End


            6楼2013-06-23 01:38
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              噫。。木有人么?= =


              7楼2013-06-24 08:30
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                慢慢写,你几年级了?发现了几处错误,有空和你慢慢改,别灰心。


                IP属地:河南来自Android客户端8楼2013-08-07 12:30
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                  名字不是蝇王吗?


                  来自Android客户端9楼2013-08-09 17:33
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                    早些时候开始写是很不错的练习。好好加油哦!我要是早些开始练习就好了。。LZ能说一下几年级了吗~


                    IP属地:上海10楼2014-02-07 23:05
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                      。。。错还真不少


                      来自iPhone客户端11楼2014-04-03 17:23
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                        不过勇气可嘉


                        来自iPhone客户端12楼2014-04-03 17:24
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                          楼主楼主可以解释整篇的大概情节吗?因为我词汇量不多


                          来自Android客户端13楼2014-08-20 20:04
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                            楼主写的不太连贯啊!最好加个and神马的!各种挫折啊!


                            来自iPhone客户端14楼2015-04-30 15:11
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                              加油楼主待更


                              IP属地:福建15楼2015-05-18 12:17
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