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2011年6月4级英语作文
题目:Online Shopping
要求:1.现在网上购物已经成为一种时尚 2.网上购物有很多好处,但也有不少问题 3.我的建议
Recently, Online shopping has been brought to the notice of public, gradually, fascinated with a great many people, coming to a prevailing tendency taken over the world.
Online shopping, as it is, is loaded in favor of our daily life. As it does in the case of online shopping, which makes purchases in all convenience. Therefore not out of home a variety of goods is access to us. In addition to that, we can get a good bargain through turning it to account in highest measure. However, there is not always the case. There appears to be some potential problems, mainly consisting of trade and personal information.
For my perspective, there should be no preferential weighting of one or another. Nevertheless, on no account can we be ignorant of its drawbacks. We feel obliged to enhance the security of online shopping and promote the service at the most comfortable.
麻烦大神指点指点,小弟感激不尽。


1楼2013-08-05 14:30回复
    对我来说,你的作文比我的好非常多!!我每次四级作文写的都和初中水平一样。单词句子都是简单要命的那种。。


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