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于是我决定把我在美国写过的文章放出来。然后。。。。。坐等吐槽。


IP属地:美国1楼2013-11-08 11:50回复
    我已经努力翻了。。第一年时候的文章大概一个都没找到。。。。


    IP属地:美国2楼2013-11-08 12:16
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      2011-9-25
      My Sister
      My sister name is Anna. She speaks English. She is 16 years old. She is learning Chinese in BMHS.
      Anna is hard working. She works at my dad's restaurant almost everyday. She helps my dad by pucking up phone, put food in the deepfrying, and more. And she doing fine in school.
      Anna is hilarious. She is random and loves jokes. She is always laughing and smiling which makes people happy. She likes to change the tone of her voice, which is funny, because she is bad at it. One time, I got into a fight with her where she wanted to beat me up. She came up to me and lift her fist at me. She said, "You better shut up!" And she chuckled and ran away. I laughed because it was very random and awkward.
      Anna is also responsible. When she has work to do, she makes sure she gets it done no matter what. When we are out with the family, she looks after younger kids, even when the parents are around, because she feels parents aren't responsible. She will speak up when she thinks something is wrong is going to happen whether if it's something to do with her or a friend or family member. She took me to NYC by herself, and she took care by making sure I ate and have a sit on the train or subway.
      She is nice sister.


      IP属地:美国3楼2013-11-08 12:38
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        仅供笑笑。很多错误← ←。。。。


        IP属地:美国4楼2013-11-08 12:40
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          其实我是来刷经验的,点头。


          IP属地:美国5楼2013-11-08 12:40
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            Pull Up Your Pant
            Shoul students have to pull up their pant? It is fair? In my opinion is, yes. It is fair. Because showing the underwear is disrespectful. It cause poor school spirit. When sthdents dress nice,they may do better in school.
            Showing the underwears is disrespectful. Students pull thier pants down is not cool. It is silly.Ithink no one likes to see someone's underwears. I don't know why those students don't feel ashamed about it.
            Sagging pants cause poor school spirit. How do we know a school is good or bad? First, we look at the students. If people saw some students pull their pants down, and showing theri underwear. Will the people think that is a good school? These are good students?
            If students look and feel more professional, they may do better in school. Pulling pants up makes students look more respectful and feel better aboute themselves. Dressing nice can make people feel good, may do better in school.
            Some students say, students should dress how they want. I agree. But students should dress how they want, it doesn't mean showind underwear.
            Pull up the pants. It pulling up the lives and dignity.


            IP属地:美国7楼2013-11-10 08:25
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              上篇貌似是第一年的。。诶。感觉在下当时还不错。看到谷哥的坑爹翻译痕迹的存在,笑。


              IP属地:美国8楼2013-11-10 08:28
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                = =我居然看懂了、、


                IP属地:广东来自Android客户端10楼2013-11-12 13:08
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                  2012-01-15
                  Should cand sold in the cafeteria? In my opion I don't think candy should sold in the cafeteria, becasue candy makes people get fat, it make holes in people teeth, it also makes people hyper active.
                  When people eat too much candy, it casues them to get fat. Candy has empty calories, it has no vitamins or minerals. It is not healthy to people's body. When people get fat, they moveslowly, it also can casue sugar diabetes, or hypertansion, and many other illnesses.
                  And candy causes holes in people's teeth. When people get cavities, it is pain, and they have to go to the dentist. Toothaches make people unable to eat food. If people want nice smile, they must have perfect and healthy teeth.
                  Candy also causes people to be hyeractive. When students get hyper active, they can't payattention in the class, they won't study well. They also will disturb other students in the class.
                  On the other hand, I think people should be able to buy some candy in the cafteria. If just a little candy it is okay. But, remember, don't eat too much candy.
                  In the conclusion candy should not sold in the cafeteria, beasue candy is not so good for people.


                  IP属地:美国11楼2013-11-13 10:00
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                    这篇其实是老师一边说,我一边写的。。← ←


                    IP属地:美国12楼2013-11-13 10:01
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                      果然很水


                      IP属地:广东来自Android客户端13楼2013-11-13 17:48
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