整体来说，not faithful to source text。很多细节没有考虑到，尤其是多数副词都被省略了。有两种译者，一种是完全隐形的，在译文中完全看不到他的存在，忠实地翻译每一句话每一个词，就算是原作者的错误也会如实的反映出来。第二种译者，更多的是对st做copywriting，鼎鼎大名的林纾就是这种了。也不存在好坏之分，端看译者的选择了。

我也是微博过来支持的，拜大神！

The moment I got off the bus, theglow of sunset beamed upon me as a blob ofwarm orange dyed the tips of the towers and chapels in the horizonthe same color, so bright that I almost had to cover my eyes.
Edit:
1. as …dyedthe tips of ..the same color → in the horizon ≠远处
对于原句的理解有一点偏差。Back translation：温暖的橘色光束把地平线处的塔尖和礼堂染成了和它一样的颜色。
而原句是‘远处高耸的塔楼顶尖和礼堂落满温暖圣洁的橘黄色’。
Suggested translation: with the tips of the towers and the chapels in the distance dyed/covered with the warm and saintly orange.
2. 用手指 is missing.
Under the lofty sky, the world wastranquil and peaceful.
Edit:
1. Lofty →floating cloud浮云
2. 美好 is missing. Tranquil andpeaceful both refer to 宁静
3. 显得 ≠ was
suggestedtranslation： seemed to be
Holding an introduction letter, I found 72 Pigeon street with some effort.
Edit:
1. Effort → uncountable orcountable? If countable, you should add ‘s’; if uncountable, you should not usesome to modify it.
2. introduction letter →letter of introduction
3. street→ in upper case
The landlord lady, an admirableold English ma’am, was a friend of my aunt.
Edit:
1. 伦敦 and 单身 are missing
2. ma’am → short formadam, typically used as title.
3. Admirable 令人钦佩的≠和善
In front of her two story redbrick house was a little garden, planted with Irish broom-tops, and white picketfences that hung a small wooden milk box.
Edit:
1. story →US English; maybe use storey(British En) here
2. add a hyphen between two and storey; otherwise, use plural form: two storeys
3. ‘and white picket fences that…’ →　白色栅栏围成的应该做小花园modifier， 而不是和garden形成用and连接的并列结构。
4. hung a small wooden milk box→　fences were hung with a box; or a milk box hung on the fences

@Rubioisis
用词不是很准确，另外句式还是高中生作文的感觉，稍显乏味。建议楼主下笔再大胆些。

I studied math in Cambridge, and my grades weren’t bad. My uncle once said that I know nothing but math. However, after I met Andemund, I realized that I actually know nothing at all.
时态，know→knew
帮你捉捉语法问题好了，其他的你随意来吧

I stayed in this house for five years. Met Andemund the second year
→typo? change period into comma. otherwise there is no subject for the sentence 'met andemund'

left me the forth
phrasal verb ? the forth 好像不对

The first time I met Andemund is under the apple tree
→tense

under the library
→地下停车场？

@弦墨影 快来围观！太腻害了啊啊啊

英语废围观大触，加油么么哒！！！！！

He's about to explode
→ how about 'he was about to explode with anger'