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【我就悄悄的】写个英语作文<

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其实是作业辣【。
写的是海原儿的故事<啊?!
青海组真楼
语法瞎眼注意


IP属地:美国1楼2014-05-11 11:10回复
    A long,long time ago,there was a kingdom in the sea.The man who protect the kingdom was a magician,name's Meikai.One day,the war came,because there were two princesses in the kingdom,but there was only one could be the queen.There were many people die at the war.At last,the magician protected the kingdom,and he sealed another princess.The war was over,but the magician was disappear forever.Some one said that he died,and some one said that he was still alive.


    IP属地:美国2楼2014-05-11 11:20
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      哈哈哈什么啊2333这语法是怎么了我现在才发现时间都不统一啊hhh怎么一会儿是过去时一会儿时现在时_(:3觉得自己英语烂透le


      IP属地:美国3楼2014-05-11 11:22
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        顺便说下上面那段是溟海的【


        IP属地:美国4楼2014-05-11 11:22
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          不太符合原作别在意【。】为了能写少一点<


          IP属地:美国5楼2014-05-11 11:23
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            Wadanohara is the magician's daughter,her father died before she borned.She likes to go to other islands,and she likes to play with her friends.Wadanohara is a magician like her father,and she is learning magics from her father's attendant.This is a world of peace.


            IP属地:美国6楼2014-05-11 11:35
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              对了!!1L补PO:叮当摸鱼摸出72块腹肌


              IP属地:美国7楼2014-05-11 11:37
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                等等我能写在海原儿游泳的时候她发现大海变成了红色吗【。】


                IP属地:美国8楼2014-05-11 11:44
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                  我放弃了【躺平<—不!!!


                  IP属地:美国9楼2014-05-11 11:54
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                    哈哈哈救命2333本来是纯爱的故事已经被我写成了励志故事


                    IP属地:美国10楼2014-05-11 12:08
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                      Believe in yourself!<—最后主题变成了这个【安定躺平


                      IP属地:美国11楼2014-05-11 12:11
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                        噗哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈


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