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楼主留学党一枚,gr12 准备毕业。。。。最近被一所大学录取了, 现在英文73%(很久之前bombed 了一个test。。然后就回不了头了),大学langauge requirement 要求75%才能读writing-intensive的课程,否则要考lpi或者pass一门语言课,楼主因为诗歌什么的估计加上省考也很难上到75(在我那里省考占40% )---→The ideal scenario would be passing the LPI test instead of taking another kinda necessary course in university....
转入正题。。。。。lpi主要部分为最后一个section的argumentative essay。。。大部分topic需要critical thinking(我应该没有问题)。。。现在主要的问题是 如何写一个好的intro paragraph 和conclusion。。。how do i construct a stellar intro and conclusion and possibly keep it succint ?
希望贴吧里的大神或者有经验的分享一下。。。。(词类是需要一定时间的积累(ongoing),so its out of the equation cuz the test is in a month ....)......
Ps:楼主ielts考了7分。。。但是感觉lpi比ielts难很多的样子。。。。


IP属地:加拿大1楼2014-06-01 16:01回复
    g10的渣渣来看看,eng12 73什么的简直给跪


    来自iPhone客户端3楼2014-06-01 16:05
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      敢问楼主在哪里上学


      来自iPhone客户端4楼2014-06-01 16:09
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        敢问楼主在哪里上学


        来自iPhone客户端5楼2014-06-01 16:09
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          one month.......


          6楼2014-06-01 16:25
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            Long time no see!
            First of all, it's not necessarily detrimental to take an extra class in college. I didn't pass out my writing class because my AP english was a 3, so I took the class and ended up learning a lot. Writing is really important in the way that it is crucial in a lot of fields (e.g. physics ). If you made upy our mind taking the exam I would recommend just cram some vocabularies that's useful for writing and throw them on your essay. At least it's true for SAT: good grammar and pedantic words that make no sense.


            7楼2014-06-01 16:35
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              来自Android客户端8楼2014-06-01 16:40
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                请问楼主留学要哪些条件?(急)谢谢!


                IP属地:湖北来自手机贴吧9楼2014-06-01 16:45
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                  fianally... nice to see you here btw......its been a very busy year for me...my mom shares the same opinion that taking the extra step down version of english course may help me transition better from high school to university. so it's not a major problem i dont pass the test...im only trying to give it the best shot and somewhat make it worth the money.......speaking of online resources, most of them are applied to ielts, toefl or sat.And what i am worried about is the rubric might completely be different.I was told by a website that the tutors for lpi cant comprend some sencetences which are constructed base on the modules given by some ielts tutors...they found them too redundant..well i guess in such a short period of time, the only way to improve is to cram some fancy vocabs.…. xd


                  IP属地:加拿大来自Android客户端10楼2014-06-02 00:19
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                    Here's something I summarzed while I was in high school:
                    http://www.scribd.com/doc/227492326/Thearus-for-essays
                    Here's a list of smart words, you don't have to know this one because it's kinda hard. I'm just gonna throw it out there...
                    http://www.scribd.com/doc/227491551/Smart-Words
                    Anyways, just make sure your essay is good-written (not too many grammar problems) and clear. Use smart words but don't use confusing sentence structures.


                    11楼2014-06-02 02:55
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                      看到这种中英文夹一起说的就没耐心看了


                      来自iPhone客户端12楼2014-06-02 03:00
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                        Got no idea what you are talking about, but I guess within a month there is not so much you can do. Hope craming vocabulary would not make your essay look like a patched work


                        来自Android客户端13楼2014-06-02 06:40
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                          嗯,说的很对,我也这么认为,楼主粉我吧!


                          来自Android客户端14楼2014-06-02 11:00
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