啊，发错了。。。。之前在一个视频网站倒是看到过一个音频+照片的视频，然后 爱人 翻译成了 情妇 ，觉得怪怪的……于是搜了一下别的版本，看到了这个。。。只去仔细看译文了。。要不然删除了重新发吧

My mistress' eyes are nothing like the sun;
Coral is far more red than her lips' red;
If snow be white, why then her breasts are dun; If snow is white, then her breasts are a brownish gray;
If hairs be wires, black wires grow on her head. If hairs are like wires, hers are black and not golden.
I have seen roses damask'd, red and white, I have seen damask roses, red and white [streaked],
But no such roses see I in her cheeks; But I do not see such colors in her cheeks;
And in some perfumes is there more delight And some perfumes give more delight
Than in the breath that from my mistress reeks. Than the horrid breath of my mistress.
I love to hear her speak, yet well I know I love to hear her speak, but I know
That music hath a far more pleasing sound; That music has a more pleasing sound.
I grant I never saw a goddess go; I've never seen a goddess walk;
My mistress, when she walks, treads on the ground: But I know that my mistress walks only on the ground.
And yet, by heaven, I think my love as rare And yet I think my love as rare
As any she belied with false compare. As any woman who has been misrepresented by ridiculous comparisons.
我的爱人没有阳光一般明亮的眼睛,
也远远没有赛过珊瑚的红唇；
她的胸脯比白雪幽暗,
如麻的黑发长在她的头顶。
我见过红、白各色的玫瑰,
可玫瑰的颜色在她面颊上全无踪影；
如果说香水气味芬芳,
可她的呼吸中香味难寻。
我爱听她开口讲话,
虽远不如音乐悦耳动听：
我的爱人走路是常人的步态,
我承认从未见过仙女的身形。
然而,天啊,我的爱人弥足珍贵,
尽管难与那些美妙的比喻相提并论。
这是我在搜索出来的原文和翻译，但是我想要一个风格更加朴素的中文版本，哪位大神有或者能试着翻译一下呢？是直译的就可以，不用斟酌句子，只求没有语法问题。。。因为是情书啊，我想就算直译应该也很美吧~~谢谢~

激动地被镇楼图骗进来了，结果完全不是这会事，诶

My mistress' eyes are nothing like the sun;
我那相好的那俩眼珠子可不像日头似的
——楼主你是想要这样的翻译嘛？
Just kidding~

原来的翻译挺好的嘛……情诗太朴实也不好吧，应该词句优美些读着带感。

被镇图楼带进来了233333

我爱的你没有明亮的双眼
也没有美丽的红唇；
她胸前的肌肤比白雪要灰暗一些,
头顶长着漆黑的长发。
我见过红色或白色的玫瑰,
可她脸上从没有过玫瑰的颜色；
如果说香水气味芬芳,
可她的气息并不方向。
我爱听她说话,
虽然不像音乐那样动听：
我爱的人走路姿势很平凡,
我承认我没有见过仙女是什么样的。
但是啊 我爱的人已经足够珍贵了,
就算她比不上那些美好的东西