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Like other salesman,I am a salesman of domestic car of people is used for vehicle.The automobile brand is "KIA”. 想表达的意思:像其他销售员,我是一个家用的,被人们用作交通工具的汽车售货员。汽车的品牌是kia。写错的欢迎大家来水


来自iPhone客户端1楼2014-08-08 06:51回复
    路过。。


    IP属地:福建来自Android客户端2楼2014-08-08 14:36
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      Like other salesman,I am a salesman of domestic car of people is used for vehicle.The automobile brand is "KIA”. 想表达的意思:像其他销售员,我是一个家用的,被人们用作交通工具的汽车售货员。汽车的品牌是kia。写错的欢迎大家来水
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      like other salesman, (正确) --- sea-1
      I am a salesman of domestic car. (正确) --- sea-1
      后面的不对了,然后如果按照我没有理解错的意思,就可以继续写:
      domestic car of "KIA" brand. (正确) --- sea-1
      其他的“被人们作为交通工具的”就是废话了,汽车本来就是交通工具。
      所以答案:
      like other salesmans, I am a salesman of domestic car of "KIA" brand.
      如果你想加深描述,可以再salesmans 后面加 单纯动作的那个sea-3,
      like other salesmans selling cars, I am a salesman of domestic car of "KIA"brand.


      3楼2014-08-08 17:25
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