@草莓BBC 你说，我是你在贴吧认识的第二个人。我当即就愣住了，虽然一开始很诧异，但一种复杂的兴奋和感动在我心中激荡。（是真的！我没矫情）你说我给你感觉很亲切，或许在现实中就不恰当了......你爆过照，这个只有三个人看过从那次小打小闹认识后，我们的关系就近了一步。

媳妇快来

然后发展到我们从不敢爆音到互相飙歌（中间好像少了些什么）......

I still remember we how to met each other.when I first met you,I said,"you can live happier."

that time you were really sad.

so I hoped (过去式是这个吗）you can be stronger than the past.and we met 山谷together.in fact,I knew him half a year ago,but I never make friend with him cause he was so serious.that time I thought he was over 40,oh what old he is!(当然只是我目测！）

but the truth was different from it.it was easy to get along with him.we always talk relaxing on 贴吧or QQ.Although we didn't meet too long times,I felt like we met before five years.

话外：when Sushi born one thousands years,could we go to Mei mountain together? we are much younger than 山谷,though.

我怎么回复不起楼中楼！

朋友一生一起走，那些日子不再有（请自行脑补）尤其是，我遇上了你们，这必定会成为我人生中一次美丽的邂逅。（感情闸门开了就止不住啊！！）
[url]http://@草莓BBC[/url]你说，我是你在贴吧认识的第二个人。我当即就愣住了，虽然一开始很诧异，但一种复杂的兴奋和感动在我心中激荡。（是真的！我没矫情）你说我给你感觉很亲切，或许在现实中就不恰当了......你爆过照，这个只有三个人看过从那次小打小闹认识后，我们的关系就近了一步。
然后发展到我们从不敢爆音到互相飙歌（中间好像少了些什么）......
I still remember we how to met each other.when I first met you,I said,"you can live happier."
that time you were really sad.
so I hoped (过去式是这个吗）you can be stronger than the past.and we met 山谷together.in fact,I knew him half a year ago,but I never make friend with him cause he was so serious.that time I thought he was over 40,oh what old he is!(当然只是我目测！）
but the truth was different from it.it was easy to get along with him.we always talk relaxing on 贴吧or QQ.Although we didn*t meet too long times,I felt like we met before five years.
话外：when Sushi born one thousands years,could we go to Mei mountain together? we are much younger than 山谷,though.
【一楼一楼的看起太累了，我给你整合一下】

I still remember we how to met each other.when I first met you,I said,"you can live happier."
【（meet的） e打掉了】
oh what old he is!【应为HOW OLD HE IS】
we always talk relaxing on 贴吧or QQ【 talk relaxing 是……】
,I felt like we met before five years.【应为“before 5 years ago 或more than 5 years】
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首先，作为初中英语的语法角度，修改一下几句话咯！
然后呀，看了很想笑啊！具体内容既感慨见楼下！

苦逼的新电脑，点都不熟悉了@__烧枫糖

推荐歌目——until it*s gone

我终于看得起楼中楼了