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1楼2014-10-25 15:45回复
    The Chinese exchange programBecause the Chinese exchange program, I met a girl—Katherine, before she came to china, we sent the e-mails and exchange the photograph of ourselves. Although many days past, I still remember the three days with Katherine. Last Sunday, my family and I went to school to pick up Katherine, near 12:00a.m they arrived. I saw her at first sight, at that time, I am a bit shy and don not know what to say, when the teacher took her to me, I tried to relax myself, after a few seconds, I clamed down then introduced my family to her, she is very friendly and kind. After lunch, we went to the order of mountain Bike Park. The landscape there like a picture, each of us rented a bicycle and put on the helmet. Now, the journey began. At the beginning, all the way are unimpeded. When other biker saw us, they said ‘hello’ to Katherine. Do you think it is cute? Along the way, we stop and go. After the several lakes, Katherine told me that there are few lakes in her hometown, which is different from Yi Xing. Maybe this is the purpose why we have this exchange program. The teachers want us to chat with the American students, understanding the differences between the USA and china, like the cultural diversity, the difference of geographical conditions and the food cultural differences. When we want to go bake to the gate, we find we can not find the way, however, Katherine according to the sign and find the right way. It was a nice little interlude quickly forgotten. We had a dinner in the restaurant; I find that Katherine only ate a little. On the grounds that the restaurant is close to my house, so I suggest we can walk home together. Perhaps we have spent an afternoon; we have a large numbers of topics to discuss, such as our interesting, the university we want to go and her special voice. All the laughing and talking on the way home. On account of we should go to school tomorrow, after coming home, we went to ourselves’ living room to have a rest.On Monday morning, she made a breakfast for us. It is delicious. My parents praised her to the breakfast. It is the first time for Katherine to study the Chinese objects. We held a welcome ceremony for the students and the teachers form the Colorado, springs. We introduce ourselves, like the name, the hobbies and each thing you want to talk about. The whole day, we have the American history, speaking class, pottery class, music class and PE class. The goal to have these classes is let them feel the Chinese culture. In the evening, we went to my father’s friend’s home that is famous for making the teapot, the host taught us how to make the teapot, form my point of view it is very interesting.On Tuesday, we go to the Castle Peak in the social practice base and the attractions in Yi Xing. All of us are enjoying it. Because Katherine will left tomorrow afternoon, I took her to the street after dinner. We tasted much local food.


    2楼2014-10-25 15:46
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      谢谢啦


      3楼2014-10-25 15:46
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        Exchange Student Program
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        Picturesque


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          The Chinese Students Exchange Program
          Due to the Chinese Student Exchange Program, I met a girl called Katherine. Before she came to China, we contacted via emails and also exchanged our photographs to each other.


          6楼2014-10-25 15:50
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            Many days had passed and I still remember the precious three days that get together with Katherine.


            7楼2014-10-25 15:55
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              Last Sunday, my family and I went to school to pick up Katherine. They arrived approximately 12:30 noon. When I saw her at first sight, I felt shy and stunned.


              8楼2014-10-25 15:58
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                When my teacher brought her to me, I tried to relax and calm down myself. Then, I introduced my family and myself to Katherine. And we got to know that she is a very friendly and kind-hearted girl.


                9楼2014-10-25 16:11
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                  After we had our lunch, we went to the border of the Mountain Bike Park. The scenery at the park was very stunning. We rented two bicycles and put on the helmets.


                  10楼2014-10-25 16:14
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                    The journey began. There was no impedance along the way. When the other bikers saw us, they greeted Katherine. We stopped by at several stations to have a rest. After that, we continued our journey in the park. We passed by some beautiful lakes. Katherine told me that there are a few lakes in her hometown too. But they are different from Yi Xing.


                    11楼2014-10-25 16:23
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                      I started to realize the purpose of having this students exchange program. Our school teachers wanted to train us to be able to socialize and communicate with the American students.


                      12楼2014-10-25 16:27
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