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漆黑的夜
                             五彩的霓灯
                                眼神迷乱
                              舞姿魅惑
                               沉沦吧
                                 堕落吧
                             暗黑的天使
                               带着你的泪
                                 你的心
                              一起堕落
                              让你所有的恨
                           化为那魅惑的黑色  
                              附着在你曾经纯洁的羽翼上 
                           让黑夜赐予你
                               快乐
                            让痛苦赐予你
                               幸福
                           曾经的曾经
                               那只是曾经
                            忘却吧
                               让恨燃烧你的心野
                          忘记所有的所有
                              从今以后
                                不再纯洁
                            不再正义
                               让这个世界     
                                一起毁灭
                         让这个世界
                                随你一起舞动
                              让这个世界
                       为你疯狂
                           让曾经的一切
                           迷乱      毁灭
                                 ……      


1楼2008-03-16 19:03回复
    • 221.223.100.*
    顶下


    2楼2008-05-12 10:06
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      这种消极很不好哦,但节奏不错


      3楼2008-08-16 12:20
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        黑色的诗篇
        不错


        4楼2008-08-16 18:43
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