好久没发帖了~过两天复试~good luck~

Good morning, dear professors! I am very glad to be here for this interview. First let me introduce myself. My name is XXX , 24 years old. I come from the Port of fangcheng, which is a beautiful small city located in the south of guangxi province. I have graduated from Shanghai XXX university in 2014, majoring in XXX.
I am a girl who is optimistic and patient girl. Well, my favorite pastime is playing badminton or having a chat with my friends. But sometimes I prefer to stay alone, reading and listening to music. At the same time, I've been strict demands on myself, and constantly seeking progress during undergraduate course.

厉害哦，我这么大了都没搭过飞机

As the saying goes: Dream as if you will live forever．Live as if you'll die tomorrow. what have you lived for? A philosopher said that the longing for knowledge was one of the reasons to live. Of course, it is also one of my reasons to live. Moreover, it is important for one to realize his dreams, especially in this modern competitive society. In addition the support of my family and I am eager to learn in Shanghai XXX university. That is why I choose to further my study here.
That`s all for my introduction, Thank you very much for your time and attention.

有几处病句

啥复试哦

读完研回来大防港建设家乡

觉厉

I am a girl who is optimistic and patient girl. 我高一都写不出这样的病句