学霸你们在哪里？大神你们在哪里？英语渣能写那么点也不容易啊！

第一句没看懂… will be …are never…

第一句真心没明白要表达什么

We may have failed several times, but that means we have space to improve in the future. However, you could be a loser forever if you gave up. Come on, Henry! You are never alone.

原表达基本上是没得救的了

没姿色懒得虐

Judged by this way, we might be losers, but we will be better and better in the future if we try harder.
However, if you give up, you might be the loser forever. Come on, Henry! You are never alone.
逻辑关系混乱和各种语法错误。本着尊重原稿的原则，勉强改成这样了。

中式英语

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on？

好中国的表达...完全不知道怎么改了

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