【经验】托福独立写作范文解析

【思路解析】
To begin with, senior citizens could maintain the dynamic and refreshed spirit when routinely accepting the new things .
Moreover, knowledge about new technologies can be greatly helpful in improving the quality of older people’s life.
It is obvious that the speed to understand new things would start to stumble as people age. However, memories would be revived with the uninterrupted studying.

【举一反三】
Words and Phrases
1. to illustrate 解释为“具体来说”，和上周讲解的短语to specify一样，一般用来连接理论与解释、例证的连接词。

2. be helpful/conducive/beneficial “对..有利”，替换并摆脱good这类常用词 ，如：Foreign economic and trade development will be conducive to the promotion of speedy national economic growth. 发展对外经济贸易有利于促进国民经济快速增长.

3. by touching the screen of smartphones “通过点击触摸屏”，其形象化的替代了by using the smartphones. 其他表达还包括: with the click of the mouse through the scrolling of the web-page
SnappCab （叫车软件）lets users call a taxi simple by touching the screen of their Smartphone. 叫车APP让用户仅凭点击一下触摸屏就可以召到一辆出租车。

Sentence Patterns
1. Hardly could they ignore the benefits brought by learning new things.
倒装句句型推荐：Hardly could they do sth. …，原句型为 They could hardly do…
使用倒装句不仅可以增加文章的句式多样性，还能够强调句子内容，又如：Hardly could people neglect the importance of keeping health. 人们很难忽略维持健康的重要性。