About family love,i have everthing to say.i love my family very love .for one thing my family buring up me,make me go to the college for another thing my family play a important vole in my life .and i want thank for my grandma .she is a kindly old woman ,that look after me in my badyhood .she always give me cooking some delicious food everyday and with me do some games make me very happiness .my grandma never beat and scold me in my badyhood .i really memory that time .and also grateful my grandma make me grow up .i also very miss my grandma .i hope she can keep health in the winter ,i will be forever love she.
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读了一遍发现挺顺畅的，还真是这辈子知识水平巅峰在高中已经过去了。。。。
Except for several grammar and usage mistakes, this paragarph is well orchestrated in some ways, at least from which one could find that the author cares about and loves her/his family very much. It is an obligation, or to put it in another way, a responsibility lots of people in society and in recent times lack or neglect. As for the way to deal with these mistakes, the author needs to put part of her/his heart into some English books, a grammar book for example.
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