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英语学霸帮我看看这段话有没有问题,应该怎么改

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Words, Shanghai's signature cuisine, that was the first food, Shanghai first snacks, you must try the NanXiang steamed, taste the best old ChengHuang temple in a small cage.
话说,上海最招牌的美食,那就是上海第一美食,第一小吃,你一定要尝尝的南翔小笼,最好尝尝老城隍庙内的小笼。


IP属地:北京来自iPhone客户端1楼2016-05-13 14:19回复
    求大神


    IP属地:北京来自iPhone客户端2楼2016-05-13 14:34
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      好大的问题😂


      来自手机贴吧3楼2016-05-13 14:35
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        大神


        IP属地:北京来自iPhone客户端4楼2016-05-13 14:36
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          Word has it that, the most famous food in Shanghai is first snack, which is its top cuisine. You must give Nanxiang Steamed Dumplings a try. You'd better give Laochenghuanmiao Steamed a Dumplings a shot.
          Just for your reference.


          IP属地:江苏来自iPhone客户端7楼2016-05-13 14:46
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            words???上海的代表性菜肴,上海首屈一指的小吃


            IP属地:上海来自Android客户端8楼2016-05-13 14:49
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              1) 中文看起来都有些奇怪。
              2) Words, signature, that was... snacks, Nanxiang steamed, best... old. 其实可以考虑整篇重写。


              IP属地:广西来自iPhone客户端9楼2016-05-13 14:51
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