I get up early as usual.I get used to getting up early as a teacher since I graduated.I have passion for English recently.Precisely,I am interested in Eifo.I read an article from Sabine half a year ago.I think I made some mistakes in Learning English.I Love teaching.I Love Children. I feel that I should Give them better and Right education.I join Eifo.I Hope that I Can Learn how to teach English from excellent teachers.I believe in Eifo.I think I Can succeed. Thankyou,Eifo.
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Today is Friday. It is windy and cold. At noon,my son's teacher told me to attend a meeting in school in that talking about Children's study in The afternoon. At 2 p.m.,I got to school.All The parents came there. The principle had a talk about The teaching theory of No.1 Primary School first. Next, The head teacher told the parents how to educate kids.I learned a lot from the meeting. My son did a good job in This test. I promise that I will watch a movie with him. He is very happy.
Sabine 老师的日记检查秘籍
写完日记，请按照自己已经学过的知识来检查一下：
1）每个句子是否正确的分开（检查标点符号）千万不要写一个很长很长的句子，中间只有逗号；
2）每个句子是否有主语和谓语；谓语是联系动词还是正常的动词；
3）主语和谓语是否搭配一致；例如，主语第一人称，谓语是否用的相应的变形；
4）谓语有没有做出正确的时态变化；
5）如果一个句子除了谓语动词以外，还有其他动词，那么其他动词是否符合了谓语动词加其他动词的结构要求；例如：finish doing sth, want to do sth.后面的那个动词是否是Doing，To Do的形式。（还没有学到的不需要管这项）
6）检查完主谓语，再看看句子的其他部分，比方说形容词，是否放在它修饰的名词前面了，副词是否放在它修饰的动词后面，其他的特殊形容词，副词是否放在合适的位子上：程度副词放Be动词后面，一般动词前面 He often eats dinner at home, He is always a good teacher，修饰不定代词的形容词放在不定代词的后面something special, anything wrong；
7）最后检查句子的上下文关系，是否清晰的用了连接词来表明之间的上下关系：并列，转折，或者因果等等: and, but, so, therefore, thus, in addition, such as, moreover,...
8）再看一遍后如果检查不出来任何你可以知道的错误，那么就确认发出。
用了以上步骤，相信不久的将来你写作中的语法错误会越来越少，你掌握的英语知识越来越多。加油！
写完日记，请按照自己已经学过的知识来检查一下：
1）每个句子是否正确的分开（检查标点符号）千万不要写一个很长很长的句子，中间只有逗号；
2）每个句子是否有主语和谓语；谓语是联系动词还是正常的动词；
3）主语和谓语是否搭配一致；例如，主语第一人称，谓语是否用的相应的变形；
4）谓语有没有做出正确的时态变化；
5）如果一个句子除了谓语动词以外，还有其他动词，那么其他动词是否符合了谓语动词加其他动词的结构要求；例如：finish doing sth, want to do sth.后面的那个动词是否是Doing，To Do的形式。（还没有学到的不需要管这项）
6）检查完主谓语，再看看句子的其他部分，比方说形容词，是否放在它修饰的名词前面了，副词是否放在它修饰的动词后面，其他的特殊形容词，副词是否放在合适的位子上：程度副词放Be动词后面，一般动词前面 He often eats dinner at home, He is always a good teacher，修饰不定代词的形容词放在不定代词的后面something special, anything wrong；
7）最后检查句子的上下文关系，是否清晰的用了连接词来表明之间的上下关系：并列，转折，或者因果等等: and, but, so, therefore, thus, in addition, such as, moreover,...
8）再看一遍后如果检查不出来任何你可以知道的错误，那么就确认发出。
用了以上步骤，相信不久的将来你写作中的语法错误会越来越少，你掌握的英语知识越来越多。加油！
Today is Saturday.But I get up as usual.This is a teacher's destiny. I had a class from eight to ten.And then I went to Sabine's open class. I learned a lot from it. Sabine is a teaching expert. She is knowledgeable.She Talked about what English teaching was like in China Today.She also gave a way to solve This problem.She is responsible.All The students like her.We are sure that we WILL learn English better soon.
Today is Monday.It is much colder than yesterday. But Life is as usual.Get up early,send my son,go to work.Though The weather is different,life is The same.Today my students had Middle exam.I Wish them good luck.After work, I went home.To my surprise, my son made up a story about My World in excitement. I was happy,too. I told him that He would be a writer If he went on writing.
Today is Tuesday.My students finished their tests today. They All feel terrible.They all think They Did bad jobs.I told you that All had gone.As long as they work hard, They will have Good grades. My son had a class tonight.David sang a beautiful song.And He told a funny story.The children Love It very much.
Today is Wednesday.After I got to school,I checked my students' test papers.The results are not good. Their writings are too bad. And reading is not good,either.We Did many exercises before taking tests.I learned a lot from The test. Speaking, listening and writing are All important, especially,speaking.Practice makes perfect.Practice speaking, listening more than doing exercises.Think of my son's English,I will Learn how to teach my students.
Today is Thursday.The test results come out.Terrible.only work hard. After work,our family had a supper.My son took a class after that.It was interesting. He likes it.I talked with students in Eifo group about How to Learn English.We talked a lot.It was a pity that I missed Joshua's oral class because of my son'class At The same time.
Today is Monday.I felt a little tired after two days' rest. Yesterday night It snowed heavily.This morning the road was smoothing. The cars' drivers drove carefully.Though,a few cars crashed.One old woman hurt outside our school. The ambulance took Her to hospital. I hope she would be better soon.After The sevenTh class I played volleyball with my workmates. We felt happy in The snow.
Today is Tuesday. It was cold in The early morning.I got up as usual.But my wife prepared breakfast Today. I woke my son up. He dressed himself slowly. I asked him to put his coat on quickly,because He was asked to get to school At seven pm.After breakfast,we left home to school. We arrived on time.Then I went to work.I had two classes. in The afternoon,I played volleyball for a while happily.
Today is Wednesday.Tomorrow is Thursday.The whole week is going to be over soon.I Have a lot of work to do.Sometimes,I feel tired.I think I don't have enough energy to finish All I want to do.There WILL be a meeting about The results of tests a few days ago.The only happy thing is to play volleyball in The afternoon.At home,I study English.I must improve my English as soon as possible. I Hope I Can Make my dream come true.
Today is Thursday. It is rainy and snowy. Too cold and wet. I felt very uncomfortable. In The evening, my son took English class. Now It is a little difficult to him. He isn't eager to study it. I want to think of some good ways to help him. I have no good ideas now. Wait and see. Hope to solve It soon.
