Pat's diary

febuary 15 th 2017 wednesday
It 's sunny day, the temperture is not higher than yesterday.
For chat ,I can't ,Especially in english, like "rule moffe"said , the more you hate what it more appear .I typing in english that 's so slowly ,but I use it in many place. I'm chat with Teery for a most of morning, took a long time.I get a little gains,but It is not too’ much while I gived the time ,so I'll change the way to learning.
I know a lot of friends in eifo campus.many people are very kind and capable: Ivy, Dora ,teery, shelly and so on ,they are my example！

February 14th 2017 Tuesday morning
Yesterday was a nice day ,the temperture has reached about 15°C how warm it is ! It was the first day of the children go to schoool too,I like the weather like this!
Yesterday was my first day of going to work,When I went to the classroom ,looked at the children's faces very careful, they were so know and beautiful and they were growed taller than last year ! I believe they will be better in the future! I was very thanks for my life ,for people,for everythings at just that moment!
The children looked at me , their's teacher too,I knowed ,they like me! then ,We encourage to each other .at last a child laughes ,and two laugh ...... we all laugh !I love my work ,love them!
It has two new students joined us yet,one name was chenxing li, the other was yankun du,both of them look very cute。
'keep writing ,keep striving,keep moving forward'.I used our president's word send for you ,for me!

february 13th 2017 monday
It was a busy yesterday!
My child will go to school, he preplied his thing that he can used at school in the moring. look at the bedroom,whatamess!
but what about me? I washed a lot of clothers ,a sheet and two quite cover and as soon.than I clean the room until afternoon.It was too busy to have lunch。Than I received a call from my aunt, her son was ill and he was in the hospital , My aunt wis::hed that I can make sometime to visit him, so I visited him with My dad, Mycousin could' t recognize us ,we were sad for that, He is a cute , gentle boy . I best like him of my cousins ! We hope he get well soon!

february 11th 2017 Saturday
Today is a holiday of the lantern festival. let me began to write diaries from abeautiful day!
It was a happy and sad yesterday! It was happy becouse a badminton player, his level more than me , He played with me a long time,I learned more from there, for example: turn my body ,step for my left feet first，step to heavy as well…It was a fun day! I wanted to say to him:Thank you very much!
It was a sad day becouse a wamen, at same place of the gymnasium , she gaved me a nickname , I had been talken to her with clarm which one I can't like of all, but she still did it . what a doesn't politely women she is! I don't think I can argue with her, but I hate the kind of person like her!
Life is always full of up and down,so we have to receive her, hug her and lovely her!

February 17 th 2017 Friday
Taday is a windy day. when I woke up in the midnight, I heard the whirring wind, how hard it was! the temperture is down now, I'm feel cold!
It is very busy in the morning of everyday ,I wake up early, then I read an English book or practice listen.after an hour ,I get up at 7:00, I cook for my sweetheart,some times for my family,Those are light breakfast.Yes,We usually have light breakfast,It has milk ,dry toast ,dumplings ,fruit ,bread and porrige.I send him to go to school after that
soon.It's time to began to work! then,I took one hour to sports at gym in the afternoon.
One thing I forgot to say,myson listened my voice that I practiced the test yesterday, He said:"mum,your voice is so nice and you are nice, youshould do star!" hahahha ,thanks for my son 'appreciation!

February 18th 2017 saturday
today is weekend，the sun comes up, It looks good ! I can take a rest !yes,I need a break from learning, spring is coming,It feels great to move around.finally, I go to the gymnasium, yet! haha! I enjoy badminton,It is the most exciting to me.when I lose, my mind is sad,I can think why do I lose, when I win ,It's Ok, I can jump up ,I'm so happy!
After sports ,gether round with family to have a big dinner in my sister's house tonight,shemade chores very fast,she is a good women and very hard working yet,she always bring us happy and delicious food, she is one of kind , look! she put the dishes away already when we have finished eating.we love her very much!

February 19 2017 Sunday
today morning I turn on my phone to see information of my learning group,I saw a picture that it was taken in twenty years ago,I'm very young and so beautiful !I feel that I enter to the older years…we had efforts learned and fell in love…how happy we are ! few people ,few thing are always in my heart forever! if the life can go back,what was my other choice, where am I now? how am I? I think...but I can't go back, these are supports! I like to see movies about science fiction, It has about dimension， the time was folded,I can chioce other life，if my life not good,I can go back to continue, repeat again…like now, I 'll be effort then befor, I'll plan my life,understand and tolerant than before. It's my imagine?

February 20th 2017 monday
today,is a rain day, and it's clod, so my mood fall in down, I'm afraid of cold ,I'm bend like a bird in my house! I don't feel very well,i've got a pain in my back.,I sweated last night ! Ihope I'll be well soon. Today is a busy day! I've many things to do,make chore ,do my home work and buy something.,my phone is broken,Because I accidentally deleted the files about camera ,woo, It's not use.I'm so sad! I'm so busy,but i've no time .today's diary I don't want to write long, I'll go !

February 21th 2017 Tuesday
I chat with my teacher this morning ,I don't know that I make so many mistakes! for example :enjoy losing your face...can't learn .....enjoy +gerund,can+verb ,my vocabulary is limited the sentences is corrct, or I can say:I know very little vocabulary or Iknow very few words......not my vocabulary is less! and forgot ,Ms. sabine said: I'm glad to see you guys are taking this opportunity机会 to practice english. I'm glad to see you online .the sentences is not at omline .so I answerd: I can make many mistakes,the sentence is false,the conrrct is not can .she explaned:I make ...not I can,can means ability,you cartainly don'n want that sort of abilities！haha,sure ,I can't ,i'm thanks for you very much, Miss sabine!

Feburary 22th 2017 WEDNESDAY
The sun comes up ,It's nice day! I asked my partner how do I write the diary ?I make many mistakes,I think that how about my next step?copy or repeat、I don't know how to write correct sentences first.,Ivy answer me:"you can write what you just learned in EIFO!that a good idea! I would not like to check it online frist when Imeet something I don't know .so i'll check it online later. I 'm reviewing now! what do you do for living ,what do you do exactly
Anna :what's it like working with sick people all day ,Alex?
Alex: It's difficult because many patients need a lot of care.
Anna:Oh,you give them medicine and maybe change bandages?
Alex: yes ,and we have to write everything on chairs for the doctors.
Anna：Anything else?
Alex:We help people get for tests, sometime they're pretty nervous.
Anna :sounds like It's a stressful job.
Alex:yeah,but I really enjoy it ,I feel good doing it,I love helping people, and they always thank me .
Anna ::well ,good for you.

Feburary 23 2017 Thesday
Today,is mother's birthday,happy birthday to you ,mum!
I'm always busy since I come to EIFO ,yes,I bet is typical, My alarm goes off at 6:30 ,I take my time getting up,I rise and shine with exercise,then I wash up quickly. I brush my teeth,comb my hair and put on my clothers, then send my son who pack his bag for school,we never miss breakfast,so we eigher eat at home or eat on the way to school,but we always eat in a hurry.after school ,I went to work like all my friends.finally,I go home and learning english ,I am usually in bed at 10:30.this is my routine from monday to friday.however,the weekends are diffirent,I can wake up and have a ball, I can do whatever I like .Is your day the same as mine?

写完日记，请按照自己已经学过的知识来检查一下：
1）每个句子是否正确的分开（检查标点符号）千万不要写一个很长很长的句子，中间只有逗号；
2）每个句子是否有主语和谓语；谓语是联系动词还是正常的动词；
3）主语和谓语是否搭配一致；例如，主语第一人称，谓语是否用的相应的变形；
4）谓语有没有做出正确的时态变化；
5）如果一个句子除了谓语动词以外，还有其他动词，那么其他动词是否符合了谓语动词加其他动词的结构要求；例如：finish doing sth, want to do sth.后面的那个动词是否是Doing，To Do的形式。（还没有学到的不需要管这项）
6）检查完主谓语，再看看句子的其他部分，比方说形容词，是否放在它修饰的名词前面了，副词是否放在它修饰的动词后面，其他的特殊形容词，副词是否放在合适的位子上：程度副词放Be动词后面，一般动词前面 He often eats dinner at home, He is always a good teacher，修饰不定代词的形容词放在不定代词的后面something special, anything wrong；
7）最后检查句子的上下文关系，是否清晰的用了连接词来表明之间的上下关系：并列，转折，或者因果等等: and, but, so, therefore, thus, in addition, such as, moreover,...
8）再看一遍后如果检查不出来任何你可以知道的错误，那么就确认发出。
用了以上步骤，相信不久的将来你写作中的语法错误会越来越少，你掌握的英语知识越来越多。加油！

Febuary 24 2017 Friday
No matter what ,I'll be an expert at work I do.
I did a significant thing in the morning, It took me nearly most morning to do it.
Listen and write !
I went to back so later that I don't listen and write it of all completely. beacouse it was my mothers birthday yesterday. so today, I listen and write the text of yesterday's again, I writed little word before,my type is slowly and make mang mistakes. when I writed, I maked correction it many times, finally ,it has been a perfect text !the time is nearly to 11.30 too. This is my work:
School and your family
Unit 21 where is your homework
A Did youfinish your home work for English class?
B Homework?There wasn’t any homework.
A We haveto finish reading a book, and then write a 2oo word essay on it.
B I don’tthink Ms. john give us any homework. I always write what I have to do in mynotebook, Did she really tall us to write an essay?
A Yes,look ,here’s my an essay ,see?
B Oh, no ! What am I going to do, We’ve only got ten minutes before class starts.
A I don’tknow, Maybe Ms. Jones will let you hand it tomorrow .
B Hey, let me copy your essay, I’ll change afew words, Ms. Jones will never know .
A No, I’msorry ,That’s not right thing to do .
B Oh ,come on, I thought you were my friend.
A I’myour friend, That ‘s why I’m not letting you copy my work！

febuary 25 2017 saturday
Today is a sunny day, the temperature is about 15 degrees centigrade.The days are getting hotter,the weather was terrible last week.it's so miserable! Today ,I'll type a text: as my diary of today:
An unusual holiday If you could take a trip to anyplace ,What would you go ,A warm sunny beach,Afamous city?A beautiful moumtain? our world has many wonderful place to see,but what if you could take a trip out of this world? what about a trip into space ? It's possble.the first space tourist was an american named Dennis Tito,,he flew up on a Russian rocket with two Russian scientists.They flew to the international space station ,Mr. Tito spent almost eight days on the station.It's wasn't a cheap vacation,Tito paid over $20 million to the goverment of Russia for his chance to be the first tourist in space, Since then ,six other people have taken a similar trip.
In 2004 ,there was a contest called the x-prize ,It was a new race to space .the goal of contest was to help find a lower-cost way to trvel into space .the winner of the x-prize get $10 million.
There were some important requirements .frist ,no goverment could be a part of the contest.Company could not use goverment money to build the spacecraft. second, The spacecraft had to be large enough to carry three people.Third , the spacecraft had to fly at least one hundred kilometers above the Earth.that is what scientists consider to be the beginning of space. and lastly,the spacecraft had to made two trips within two weeks,
The winner of the prize was spaceship one ,soon after they won,the company that built spacecrafr one announced a new plan .They want to start making regular space flights ,they plan to build five new spacecraft .each one could take up to ten people into space The ticket price is still expensive:$200.000.There have not been any flightsyet ,But so far,over four hundred people have put their names on a waiting list.