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上述文章开头段问题点评：
1、句子之间逻辑较凌乱； 第一至第三句话没有必然的逻辑联系；
2、主旨句：与题目的要求有差距；
3、拼写问题、词汇使用问题。
具体剖析：
第一句：高薪与生活品质是时代的主题。
第二句：越来越多的人对于家庭财产（effects）有极大的热情。
第三句：与过去人相比，人们中会有一部分给自己的房子购买很多商品--他们相信高质量生活 能够带来幸福感。
大家通过对于三个句子的简短翻译与理解，明显发现：三句话很难有内在紧密的联系，这会造成 “文章难以理解、进而文章论证效率低下的问题！”

那么雅思大作文6.5-7.0水准的开头段 到底要怎么去写？
开头段；
Higher income and the pursuit of life quality are thethemes of modern times. And in order to improve life quality, an increasing number of residents have alreadybought a wide range of household items including from dish-washer to hair-dresser,from air-conditioning to rice cooker-to ease life ,to reduce labour , and to amuse soul. And talking about thisconsumption activity , i tend to advocate this development.

中心句1 Firstly and directly , the wide application of household applianceactually save labour much .
中心句2
Secondly , the consumption of household items in turnboosts the advance of relevant industry.
中心句3 ；Lastly, with the solid progress of thisphenomenoni, users indeed enjoy their life .

中心句中匹配的让步句子。Admittedly , by thistrend , worryings are focusing on”couch potatoes” and” lazy bones”-whichpeople often accuse and which is oftenbelieved to be the symbol of being both physically and psychologically weak.