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On Lily’s birthday, a lot of friends come to her house and give her surprise. She is really happy about it. They sing songs and play a lot of games. But only one pity for Lily, her father is on business and can’t company her. When everybody goes home, her father goes home and this is the best gift for her.
在莉莉生日那天，很多朋友来她家给她惊喜。她真的很开心，他们唱歌，玩游戏。但是唯一的遗憾是莉莉的父亲出差了，不能陪她。当每个人都回家后，她的父亲才回到家，这对她来说是最好的礼物。
Today, when I go home after school at noon, the moment I walk in the house, I smell the good scent. I know my mother is cooking the delicious food. Then I see my uncle and my aunt are sitting in the room talking with my father. I say hi to them and then rush to the kitchen. The food is such tempting, and my mouth is watering.
今天，我中午放学后回家时，一进家门就闻到了香味，我知道妈妈正在烹饪美味的食物。然后我看到我的叔叔和阿姨坐在房间里跟我爸聊天。我跟他们打了个招呼就冲进厨房。食物非常的诱人，我流口水了。
When I lived in my hometown, I liked raining so much, because sometimes I could see the rainbow, it is so beautiful and attractive. I remembered the first time when I saw the rainbow. It was a stuffy afternoon, when I took a nap, I heard it rained, but there was sunshine in the sky. After an hour, the rain stopped. I walked out of my house and took a look at the sky, I saw a long colorful bridge in the sky. It appeared clearly, so close to me, it seemed that I could walk it to the sky. Now I live in the city, but I never see such beautiful rainbow again. The city’s buildings cover the sky.
当我住在家乡的时候，我很喜欢下雨，因为有时候我能看到彩虹，那是如此的美丽和吸引人。我记得第一次看到彩虹的时候。那是一个闷热的下午，当我在午睡的时候，我听到了下雨声，但是天上还有阳光。一个小时过后，雨停了。我走出房子，抬头看天空，我看到了天空中一条多彩的桥。那是如此的清晰，离我也很近，似乎我能沿着它走上天空。如今我住在城市里，淡水再也没有看到过如此美丽的彩虹。城市的建筑物把天空挡住了。
On Lily’s birthday, a lot of friends come to her house and give her surprise. She is really happy about it. They sing songs and play a lot of games. But only one pity for Lily, her father is on business and can’t company her. When everybody goes home, her father goes home and this is the best gift for her.
在莉莉生日那天，很多朋友来她家给她惊喜。她真的很开心，他们唱歌，玩游戏。但是唯一的遗憾是莉莉的父亲出差了，不能陪她。当每个人都回家后，她的父亲才回到家，这对她来说是最好的礼物。
Today, when I go home after school at noon, the moment I walk in the house, I smell the good scent. I know my mother is cooking the delicious food. Then I see my uncle and my aunt are sitting in the room talking with my father. I say hi to them and then rush to the kitchen. The food is such tempting, and my mouth is watering.
今天，我中午放学后回家时，一进家门就闻到了香味，我知道妈妈正在烹饪美味的食物。然后我看到我的叔叔和阿姨坐在房间里跟我爸聊天。我跟他们打了个招呼就冲进厨房。食物非常的诱人，我流口水了。
When I lived in my hometown, I liked raining so much, because sometimes I could see the rainbow, it is so beautiful and attractive. I remembered the first time when I saw the rainbow. It was a stuffy afternoon, when I took a nap, I heard it rained, but there was sunshine in the sky. After an hour, the rain stopped. I walked out of my house and took a look at the sky, I saw a long colorful bridge in the sky. It appeared clearly, so close to me, it seemed that I could walk it to the sky. Now I live in the city, but I never see such beautiful rainbow again. The city’s buildings cover the sky.
当我住在家乡的时候，我很喜欢下雨，因为有时候我能看到彩虹，那是如此的美丽和吸引人。我记得第一次看到彩虹的时候。那是一个闷热的下午，当我在午睡的时候，我听到了下雨声，但是天上还有阳光。一个小时过后，雨停了。我走出房子，抬头看天空，我看到了天空中一条多彩的桥。那是如此的清晰，离我也很近，似乎我能沿着它走上天空。如今我住在城市里，淡水再也没有看到过如此美丽的彩虹。城市的建筑物把天空挡住了。
