年少不懂事，觉得语法枯燥无聊，直到6级差3分过才追悔莫及，现在有恶补语法知识，可是在写作的运用中还是非常非常不流畅，错误百出。希望大家能够帮帮我。谢谢，爱你们。
Derections:the importance of having a sence of familu responsibility.
Having Family Responsibility Is Important
Family responsibility is in our human nature. It hides deeply in our bones and blood, even someone can't notice. However, they can't deny the existence of them.
Here are the reasons why i believe having family responsibility is important. Firstly, After our birth we are living in a huge relationship net. Having family resoinsibility is not only for ourself, but also for the people who loved by us. (我本想写 for the people who we love，感觉不太对的亚子所以改了。）Secondly, everybody has laziness but the responsibility of family pushing us to be a better father or mother, a loyal husband or wife，a filiar son or daughter.
Within the family respinsibility makes us living with selfish and care nothing except ourself. Except for god no one will love a selfish guy unless his lost his mind, the less responsibility the more loneliness. These are all the reasons about the importance of having family resonsibility. Hope we can be a wonderful family member who is full of responsibility.
用文档数了一下162个字左右。文章有点长，再次谢谢各位大佬了/