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【囧瓜女王囧】The Unspoken Farewell.

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*仅仅只是……起了个开头的英文长篇文?(死


1楼2009-12-15 15:37回复

    The Unspoken Farewell
            Feather.
            She whispers, lightly, almost soundless.
            She can feel the pain all at once, at the edge of despondence and hopelessness.
            A deep empty hollow inside her heart opens up like an abloom flower.
            It becomes bigger and bigger, dragging her down to the inferno.
            Feather. Feather.
            She wants to call, as if the best tranquillizer to thwart her collapsing soul.
            And regardless of any attempt, she was inept of making any sound.
    She feels like a trapped jailbird, wrecked and torn and lashed myriad times.
            She wants to go home, along the littoral,
    where Feather used to belong, where they longed for an eternal pacific.
           Then the pain arose to galvanize:
           She has lost him, her very Feather. That gorgeous and pallid angel.
           Feather. Feather.
           She shrieked.


    2楼2009-12-15 15:37
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      很好没时间写下去了= =于是这2个月一定要更完这篇。
      【其实这就是俺的试炼文XSKKKKK


      4楼2009-12-15 15:38
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        Chapter 1. The Eye
              It won’t be long until the sweltering summer breath hit the city in this mid august season. But there’s something Maddy never really liked about it: virtually the air. She hated when the intense sun ray hitting on her bare skin, and emitting that typical sultriness which has always stifled her whenever it visits.
        别问我这么短一段话有何意义= =(喂根本没人会看到你写的这些好么|||


        6楼2009-12-17 15:00
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          THE EYE……嘛、那只是一个开头XDDD
          涣子这纯粹是因为俺生活的环境在国外而已……乃过来的话也应该能这么写的。
          话说回来俺写的很烂啦= =而且这不是作文谢谢||||


          9楼2010-01-02 08:31
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            原谅我...
            我看不懂QAQ
            不管了!瓜爷乃一定要教我英文!!


            10楼2010-03-01 15:37
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