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一,一家英文报社正在开展题为“The person I want to thank”的征文活动,请你写一篇文章参加比赛。注意:请不要写出真实校名和姓名。
内容包括:1,你想要感谢的人是谁。
           2,举例谈谈你感谢他/她的原因。
           3,你有什么感想或受到了哪些教育。
提示词语:want, say thank you to, kind, friendly, take care of, encourage, cheer up



1楼2010-01-28 23:28回复
    • 222.130.195.*
    The person I want to thank
    In our life we will meet a lot of people,they may give us many help,the person I want to thank is my mum.
    Sometimes my mum just like my friend.In our spare time we always do lots of things,such as go to the cinema,do some shopping and so on .When I was sad,she usually cheer me up,to let me happy .When I fail,she always encourage me to stand up again.When I am successful,she would tell me not to be proud .It's bad for me.
    Sometimes my mum just like my teacher.She tells me what I should do and whatI shouldn't do.She may give me advice on the things while I am hesitating.
       My mum also take good care of me all the time.
    My mum must be the best person in the world.So,I want to say thank you to my mum.
                                                           姚汶君


    2楼2010-01-29 13:46
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      • 210.78.56.*
      The person I want to thank
      I don't know how to say,now I just want to cry.
      "Thank you my teacher."
      I'm not a good student in my class .Althought I work hard,I can't get good achievement.And our teacher ask me and my mother to talked with her."Maybe she is angry with me,I can't do it well every time."I think ."She must criticize this time."
      "She is a good girl,and work hard all the time."my teacher said.Then to my surprised she didn't criticize me at all.She just teld me and my mother how to study better,and what my weakness is.At last,she said that I can do better.
      "Don't worry,if you try you best,you are the best."
      Before it,I always think that our teacher disappointing at my study.But now I know she will believe me all the time.And I must try my best!
      


      3楼2010-01-29 16:41
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        • 202.43.146.*
        改姚汶君作文有感:
        有个别语法错误, 包括单三加s, 应该注意。
        不要写太散,应该着重写妈妈跟你似老师似朋友,不要过多的写妈妈对你生活的照顾,妈妈们都一样。除非你的语言特别好,如果就是头脑中的中译英就算了。
        其它的都挺好的。9-10分。但就是错误有点多。
                                                                                            
        We often meet some people in our life, who always give us a lot of help. The most important one I want to say thanks is my mum.
        I always feel that my mum is just like one of my friends. To be honest, we have many same hobbies, such as going to the cinema, doing some shopping and so on. I am always in her heart. Whenever I feel sad, she always cheers me up and tries her best to encourage me. Occasionally, I fail in a test, it is my mum who gives me a lot of confidence. However, when I successfully gain something in my study, my mum would always mind me not to be proud.
        I sometimes feel my mum is just like my teacher. When she tells me something I should do or shouldn’t do, she likes to tell me in a different way. My mum always gives me some good pieces of advice on those things while I am hesitating.
        I really appreciate what my mum has been doing for me over the 15 years. She is great, as she is always in my heart.
        


        4楼2010-01-29 21:04
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          • 222.130.137.*
          The person I want to thank
          Besides my parents, the person I most want to thank is my dormitory teacher.
          My dormitory teacher is a kind lady,She not only take care of my livelihood,but also encourage me in my study.One night,I can’t stop coughing and felt very bad,My dormitory teacher was very worried.She given me some medicine and hot water,I felt very warm.Thank you,my dormitory teacher.
          The other day,I failed my math exam.She set near my and cheered me up:“Don’t give up,You should regard it as a chanllenge,and just try your best to study.”Then,I felt hopeful . Thank you,my dormitory teacher.
          I rellally wang to thank her,She makes me feel at home,I will study hard to requite her.
                                               刘思辰


          5楼2010-01-29 22:48
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            • 123.118.103.*
            The person I want to thank
            As a normal people,we have to know how to treat other people grateful.And everyone has a person want to thank.The person I want to thank is my mother,she has fostered me since I was born.
            My mother is a very kind and friendly woman,she always smiles to everyone,so her colleagues like her very much.When I was ten ,I got a badly cold,and she took care of me day after day.Every night,she did not sleep until I fall asleep.
            And when fail in the exam,she always encourages me,and she often teaches me how to be a good student and a good person.
            She cheers up me as she can.
            As you see, now,I am a good student,and i want to say thank you to my dear mother!
                                                                 廖宇西


            6楼2010-01-30 15:31
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              • 123.116.159.*
              The person I want to thank
              In my life in the school,a lot of people have helped me,the teacher,my classmates...The person i want to thanks is my dorm head__lee.
              At the first time ,i didn't like her at all.Her voice is so loud that i can't stand on!But on the day when i was ill,i changed my idea.
              It was on the sport meeting,it was really cold.At the afternoon,of course,i cought a cold.The teacher allowed me to go back to the dormitory and have a rest.When i slept soudly,i heared it was noisy outside__Lee was came back too!"What are you doing?"i saked."Look after you."Lee answered.
              Then she gave me the pills and water."Eat them,and then you will fell beter."she said."Drink some water and sleep can help a lot .By the way ,don't forgot to wear more clothes tomorrow..."She said a lot of things,just like my mother.I fell warm and comfortable.My heart was moved.I knew she is a friendly 、helpful、kind girl.
              After that,I treat her more friendly than before.She helps me as usual.
              Now,i want to say"Thank you very much,Lee!Here's to the happy new year!I will never forgot you!"
                                                X.Q.Xun


              7楼2010-01-30 20:40
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                • 123.112.230.*
                The person I want to thank
                I want to thank the all the people who helped me in my life .But I strongly appricate my best friend,Li.
                He does well in math so He is always helping me with my math without having any pay back during the middle school. In addition,I study very hard in order that I don’t let him down .This is why my math grades progress these days .And when I failed in a test he also cheered me up and told me I could do better the next time .I think he is my best friend and teacher in middle school
                In the end I feel like appreciating him againl.
                                                           温丹阳
                


                8楼2010-01-30 20:46
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                  The person I want to thank
                    There are many people who are unforgettable for me in my life. Some of them have given me a help, some have given me encouragement and some have given me a lesson. But, my mom is the person that I want to thank most among them. For my mom, I’m her all.
                    One winter night I complained that the quilt at school was too thick and I asked my mom to give me another to school. Then I went to bed. Early in next morning, my mom waked me up. ‘Dear, look at this one. Is this okay?’
                  ‘It’s great. But mom, why are you so early?’
                  ‘Well, I haven’t stopped thinking about it since you told me your trouble.’ She smiled, ‘I must solve it as soon as possible.’
                  ‘You mean you didn’t sleep well all night for my quilt?’
                  ‘it doesn’t matter, my dear. ’ she said. ‘Nothing is more important than you.’
                    I felt my own throat tighten.
                    I am my mother’s all. Her biggest wish is her daughter grows up healthily and happily. She doesn’t want her daughter troubled by anything. If her daughter was in trouble, she would solve it as soon as possible.
                    That’s why I thank her most. Her love is the most precious treasure in my life.
                                                             
                                                           黄子恒


                  9楼2010-01-31 10:56
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                    • 61.50.134.*
                    The person I want to thank
                       The person I want to thank is my mother,my father works in another city   and my mom has so much work to do every day ,but she looks after me insistently I think my mom is the most kind person in the world And words cannot describe her beauty.
                       She also helps me with my problem.When I was ten years old .my teacher wants me to represent the school in the English contest But I was shy . I am terrified of speaking in front of other people I told to my mom .She said Don't worried.You are the best in my heart. Although you will win or lose.You always be my good child. But why not consider trying?It must be a good experince for you.
                         In short I won in the contest .And the most important is I won myself. I appreciate what she has done for me.I LOVE her.And I want to thank her.潘峥


                    10楼2010-01-31 17:31
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                      The person I want to thank
                      Our lives will always be some people, and sometimes it is difficult to forget them. Their presence has changed our lives, let us also learned a lot. In fact, these people may be only in our lives there a moment, but maybe make us always bear in mind.
                      This man is my deskmate who accompanied me through my high school time.
                      One day, I met a very difficult math problems, thought for a long time and no thinking. At this time, I found out I did the same table. My deskmate very common, and even never flash. On weekdays, he often would ask me some questions, but every time I have not taken very seriously, always perfunctory haste. But this time, I do not know not to ask him, afraid he laughed. But I was unable to do anything. So I decided to ask him. Did not think he was very attentive to me speaking, but also told me that idea over and over again.
                      I very much regret usually so rude to him.
                      Sometimes, we should really enthusiastic about the treatment of everyone around them, maybe they can not return anything. Perhaps, we should be more concerned about everyone, maybe we are not aware of their quiet dedication. I thank my deskmate, he made me a new sense of their own.
                      唉,好累,查字典差点挂掉


                      11楼2010-01-31 17:53
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                        • 221.220.157.*
                        The person I want to thank
                           Life always not going well,if your are lucky you will meet the people who helped you.They are very important for us in our life,so we need thank them a lot.
                           The person I want to thank are my teachers.They are not only give me a lot of knowledges but also teach me how to be a man.One day,I didn’t finish homework,because zhe homework is too difficult to me.When I hand in my homework I thought the teacher would criticizes me,and I feld very nervous all day.After school,the tercher asked me go to her’s office.I told she the reason why I was not finish zhe homework, To my surprised, she not only didn’t   criticizes me,but also gived public recognition me.She said I was honest and didn’t copied homework form others,and hoped me do that everytime.
                           I think i’m very glad to meet zhese teachers,and I’m very luck tolearn principles form them.thanks.
                                      王心曌


                        12楼2010-01-31 21:17
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                          • 125.33.50.*
                          The person I want to thank
                          There are many people go pass my life, most of them are so common but others are really special for me.
                              Especially my father, one thing he did impress me deeply Jun.31.2010 when I come back from me classmates ’party I was so hungry and I can’t found anything to eat by the time my father said a sentences that encourages me ---“let me do a egg and rice for you” I said “ok” at once.
                              Sometime later a egg and rice landed on my table it not only smell good but also look wonderful. Now I can’t stop my mind. at that time, I hardly see anything clearly I think there must be something on my eye.
                              Maybe it is not the most delicious, but it is the best one in my eye, I really want to thank you my father. You make me don’t hungry any more.
                                                                     朱子昂
                          


                          13楼2010-01-31 23:12
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                            • 210.78.58.*
                            2楼是我,桉


                            15楼2010-02-01 09:57
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                              • 211.99.244.*
                              The person I want to thank
                                  There are lots of people i want to thank.like;friends,mother,father,teachers and so on.but the most grateful i want to give is my father.He loves me very much.
                                  When i have mistakes .he didn,t criticize me.and ofen help me and encourage when i do something wrong .When i study tired ,he always let me do sports with him.However,not all the mistakes he forgive me .If i am not honest he will be very angry with me.and he may be beat me,but because of this,i am kind and friendly.
                                   Father is strict with me sometime.But he'S words is good for me.words can't express the way i feel .so the peole i want to thank is my father .i love him very much.
                              李扬安


                              16楼2010-02-01 18:26
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