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┊0404┊苏秋┊LOOK ME IN THE EYE(SHORT)

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1楼2010-04-04 20:55回复
    The breeze wanders pass the falling pieces of spring leaves.
    Will you blame the whether?
    Will you shot your disgust glance at the rivulet on wall?
    Will you turn round at the corner, to see what the stranger think of the one who just gave him the impression of smell?
    Will you look me in the eye?
    Will you?
    Of course I’m not begging you to answer.
    I know.
    Oh yes, I know.
    Always, you seem to be talking to me whole-hearted. As if you do want to look me in the eye. And catch the thoughts in my mind. Every scene, every time. And all I know what to do is hang my head to blink at your leather shoes.
    Weird. Sometimes you remind me the feeling of being held in contempt. But your smile just turn bright as I slip the words ‘no scorn’. Perfect denial.
    I understand.
    Times after times, I finally understand. Through your caustic remark, through your arrogance, through your carelessness, through your flirty perfume., I can read you. Can you believe that? The only thing i get as a compensation after being hurt for so many times. That’s the lack of sense of security. You have to hurt the others right before your are hurt.
    I realize how you are deep inside. And that’s the reason why I can stand all the pain after all.
    I guess that’s the reason of why I was willing to be here right now, too. Waiting at the airport without knowing the exact time and flight.
    Honestly, I was surprised by you. Swithching off the cellphone, disconnect with us completely. We couldn’d find you anywhere. The only thing I could do was to search the information on NET. And this is the first time I trust in my intuition. Poise was nowhere to be seen.
    Vary people flows by. I didn’t dare to relax for a single moment. Standing here with fears that I would lose you once I take a rest breath.
    Here you are.
    Right with the tone of check-in-time.
    And the next moment I have the first chance to see how’s your startled look. How amazing to see you without mask. I almost giggle outloud.
    And you suddenly surround me with a hug. That’s not what I’ve expect.
    ‘oh that can’t be him.’ Thanks to the whispers that I can remain calm after getting the reason.
    ‘God. You should really be chided.’ You murmurs. And I think I hear something that’s similar with smile.
    ‘I know.’ I pat you gently on the back.
    ‘How did you figure out the time?’
    ‘Intuition.’
    ‘Well, soulmate kinds of staff again.’ You sighs, but not heavily.
    I pause for a moment, feeling the aroma from you. The flavour that I said I like.
    ‘I am here to say—‘
    ‘To say?’ You look me in the eye.
    ‘Never ever think that you are alone.’ I am so serious that he doesn’t know how to respond.
    ‘I thought you would say something to tease me, again.’ I give you a big smile.
    ‘Um, sorry to disappoint you. Gotta go.’ You wears on the sunglasses.
    ‘Bye.’ I wave to him. You leaves me the view of back.. It isn’t lonely anymore.
    I look at my watch to start the countdown. Really, I’m serious.
    You may thinks that I didn’t see the twinkle at the corner of your eyes. But it doesn’t matter. You are such a guy false sense of pride.
    There’s something soft, warm, on my forehead.
    Hand on my cheek. I can feel it, while you look me in the eye.
    ‘I don’t wanna keep the regret for 4years, disturbing me to breathe normally.’ And this time, I’m the one who cannot control the twinkle.
    ‘Goodbye.’
    Goodbye.
    And see you.
    


    2楼2010-04-04 20:56
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      2025-06-12 04:14:49
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      3楼2010-04-04 20:56
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        要中英文一起的 亲


        4楼2010-04-04 20:58
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                 我的英语很烂


          7楼2010-04-04 23:06
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            I am here to say—‘
            ‘To say?’ You look me in the eye.
            ==========================================
            画面感很强~~~
            这文,内心独白占了大部分啵~~


            8楼2010-04-04 23:11
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              看来我要好好学英语啊~
              闭门思过去了
              亲的英语真好~


              9楼2010-04-04 23:12
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                oh my lady nana ~
                我看不懂啊~
                亲~你是外院毕业的吧?!


                10楼2010-04-04 23:18
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                  2025-06-12 04:08:49
                  广告
                  我也不懂……楼楼太强了。。我继续膜拜


                  11楼2010-04-04 23:19
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                    12楼2010-04-04 23:19
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                      我和慧慧是同一秒的。。我激动


                      13楼2010-04-04 23:20
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                        新文,顶之~~~
                        楼亲
                        我是小叶子


                        IP属地:上海14楼2010-04-04 23:21
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                          于是,我蹲墙角啃单词去了


                          IP属地:上海15楼2010-04-04 23:33
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