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例句分析
1.转换动词主体：
找到英文被动句中的“动作发出者”和“动作接收者”，从“动作接收者”的视角组织译文。
【例句】
The BBC has since changed its policy and reporters will be instructed to wear dark colored suits, with the male broadcasters in white shirts and black ties as a mark or respect.
注：BBC为英国广播公司
【分析】
首先找出“动作发出者”和“动作接收者”
在这句话中，“The BBC”是动作发出者，“reporters”是动作接收者。
转换动作主体，化被动为主动
如果按照原文语序展开，译文为“记者们被英国广播公司（BBC）要求…”；
如果尝试转换动作主体，以动作发出者的视角出发组织译文，则译文可以变为“英国广播公司（BBC）要求记者们…”，这样就能有效在译文中规避被动，使得译文更为地道。
1.转换动词主体：
找到英文被动句中的“动作发出者”和“动作接收者”，从“动作接收者”的视角组织译文。
【例句】
The BBC has since changed its policy and reporters will be instructed to wear dark colored suits, with the male broadcasters in white shirts and black ties as a mark or respect.
注：BBC为英国广播公司
【分析】
首先找出“动作发出者”和“动作接收者”
在这句话中，“The BBC”是动作发出者，“reporters”是动作接收者。
转换动作主体，化被动为主动
如果按照原文语序展开，译文为“记者们被英国广播公司（BBC）要求…”；
如果尝试转换动作主体，以动作发出者的视角出发组织译文，则译文可以变为“英国广播公司（BBC）要求记者们…”，这样就能有效在译文中规避被动，使得译文更为地道。
练习补充
More people are self-employed. But the breath of the economic transformation can't be measured by numbers alone, because it is also giving rise to a radical new way of thinking about the nature of work itself. Long-held notions about jobs and career, the skills needed to succeed, even the relation between individuals and employers—all these are being challenged. （2010年南京大学二外英语）
有兴趣的同学可以参照本文技巧自行训练，答案将在下一期翻译技巧干货的文末公布!
上期参考译文：这时你禁不住将注意力转向两人外表：一个其貌不扬，一个英俊潇洒，那你会以貌取人吗？如若以貌取人，那么哪里错了呢？
More people are self-employed. But the breath of the economic transformation can't be measured by numbers alone, because it is also giving rise to a radical new way of thinking about the nature of work itself. Long-held notions about jobs and career, the skills needed to succeed, even the relation between individuals and employers—all these are being challenged. （2010年南京大学二外英语）
有兴趣的同学可以参照本文技巧自行训练，答案将在下一期翻译技巧干货的文末公布!
上期参考译文：这时你禁不住将注意力转向两人外表：一个其貌不扬，一个英俊潇洒，那你会以貌取人吗？如若以貌取人，那么哪里错了呢？
