◇JayPark◆100510◇疑问◆我这留言有问题么?

刚在Jay的u2b留言关于让他来吧里的建议,
发完了,
刷新之后发觉自己的留言没了..
试过几次都这样,
是不是我的留言里有什么不妥的词语?
请教下各位..顺便纠正下语法~
留言如下:
Jay,
If you can see this message,
plz click this address(http://tieba.baidu.com/parkjaebeom)
it is a fans club about you in China,
and this address(http://tieba.baidu.com/f?kz=765236520)is about teaching   you how to login..
So far,because Fb,推特 or u2b(这三个当时用英文打,百度说我有不良信息) dont work in China,
It seems..only this way you can communicate with Chinese fans..
Many many Chinese fans hope you can talk with them.
The last,all of us love you!!